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k-contentbarrier- Addict
 Age: 33 Gender: Male Posts: 14139 | July 29th, 2006 at 08:46pm chorus:
Fallen too deep in love, now to see you go, you still don't know who I am
Tried to make you notice me, still you can't see. I tried as hard as I can
Spinning outta control without you in my life is something I must face
Crashing and burning, life is turning, but it's a chapter I'll never erase.
verse 1.
I tell myself it's still the same, that there'll be others.
But after all this time I still wonder about her.
And I think It'll all be fine, and that it'll turn out okay for me
But something just tells me it was meant to be
(chorus)
ver. 2:
The only reason I wake up in the morning is so I can see you again
But since you're gone what reason do I have to even live
My hopes that one day we'd be together seem to have gone away
And I'm lost and adrift inside my mind these days
(chorus)
(bridge is instrumental)
(chorus)
ver. 3:
What am I saying, there'll never be another, I know it was meant to be
Chances were blown, did I ever have any, maybe one day you'll see
How I was in love, how I was heartbroken and never had a chance
You're so beautiful, I'm just a fuck-up, what do we even have in commom?
(chorus 2x) |
Bat_Country_Chick Idiot
 Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 842
| July 29th, 2006 at 08:47pm I love it a lot. You have a very creative imagination.  |
k-contentbarrier- Addict
 Age: 33 Gender: Male Posts: 14139 | July 29th, 2006 at 08:50pm thanks!  |
DudeO King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 31 Gender: Male Posts: 2543
| July 29th, 2006 at 10:51pm Awww.
Wait did you ever even talk to this chick?
Good song though  |
Toxic Teeth Idiot
 Age: 30 Gender: Female Posts: 645
 | July 29th, 2006 at 10:57pm Do you have like music, or like guitar music for it?
That awsome any way, very creative and put together nicely.....
i would buy it...  |
k-contentbarrier- Addict
 Age: 33 Gender: Male Posts: 14139 | July 29th, 2006 at 11:00pm demon_girl_121:Awww.
Wait did you ever even talk to this chick?
Good song though 
duh, of course I talked to her.
Oh, and thanks. |
Retro Suicide Geek
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 103 | July 30th, 2006 at 12:11am I likve that. The words sem to go together really well. And I like how I feel like I can relate. I always felt that way about this one boy... but anyway it's a great song. :]] |
DudeO King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 31 Gender: Male Posts: 2543
| July 30th, 2006 at 12:14am Argh I'm a Pirate:demon_girl_121:Awww.
Wait did you ever even talk to this chick?
Good song though 
duh, of course I talked to her.
Oh, and thanks.
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Hardcore_rock_fan Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 18 | July 30th, 2006 at 12:56am "You're so beautiful, I'm just a fuck-up, what do we even have in commom? "
how many times have i wondered that about myself? |
k-contentbarrier- Addict
 Age: 33 Gender: Male Posts: 14139 | July 31st, 2006 at 03:33am thanks, you guys. These comments really encourage me to keep writing. |
Retro Suicide Geek
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 103 | July 31st, 2006 at 03:46am Argh I'm a Pirate:thanks, you guys. These comments really encourage me to keep writing.
Good. I want you to keep writing. I'm looking forward to reading your future poems. |
k-contentbarrier- Addict
 Age: 33 Gender: Male Posts: 14139 | August 1st, 2006 at 04:22am if i still write anymore. GSB kind of took away my life!  |
newagecarny Was Here Two Weeks Ago
 Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 42495
| August 1st, 2006 at 04:59am I like it.  |
[Broken Pretty] Idiot
![[Broken Pretty]](/data/board-avatars/empty.gif) Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 572 | August 1st, 2006 at 07:10am aw, its so pretty. |
k-contentbarrier- Addict
 Age: 33 Gender: Male Posts: 14139 | August 1st, 2006 at 11:36pm Thanks! Songwriting is my life, and these comments really brighten up my day. |
Dehren McGhengland Rotting On Here
 Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 49206 | August 2nd, 2006 at 12:09am Not bad, not bad at all.  |