new song, don't know what to call it.

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July 29th, 2006 at 08:46pm
chorus:
Fallen too deep in love, now to see you go, you still don't know who I am
Tried to make you notice me, still you can't see. I tried as hard as I can
Spinning outta control without you in my life is something I must face
Crashing and burning, life is turning, but it's a chapter I'll never erase.

verse 1.
I tell myself it's still the same, that there'll be others.
But after all this time I still wonder about her.
And I think It'll all be fine, and that it'll turn out okay for me
But something just tells me it was meant to be

(chorus)

ver. 2:
The only reason I wake up in the morning is so I can see you again
But since you're gone what reason do I have to even live
My hopes that one day we'd be together seem to have gone away
And I'm lost and adrift inside my mind these days

(chorus)

(bridge is instrumental)

(chorus)

ver. 3:
What am I saying, there'll never be another, I know it was meant to be
Chances were blown, did I ever have any, maybe one day you'll see
How I was in love, how I was heartbroken and never had a chance
You're so beautiful, I'm just a fuck-up, what do we even have in commom?

(chorus 2x)
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Mibba
July 29th, 2006 at 08:47pm
I love it a lot. You have a very creative imagination. Cool
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July 29th, 2006 at 08:50pm
thanks! Very Happy
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Mibba
July 29th, 2006 at 10:51pm
Awww.

Wait did you ever even talk to this chick?

Good song though Smile
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July 29th, 2006 at 10:57pm
Do you have like music, or like guitar music for it?
That awsome any way, very creative and put together nicely.....
i would buy it... Cool
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July 29th, 2006 at 11:00pm
demon_girl_121:
Awww.

Wait did you ever even talk to this chick?

Good song though Smile

duh, of course I talked to her.

Oh, and thanks.
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July 30th, 2006 at 12:11am
I likve that. The words sem to go together really well. And I like how I feel like I can relate. I always felt that way about this one boy... but anyway it's a great song. :]]
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July 30th, 2006 at 12:14am
Argh I'm a Pirate:
demon_girl_121:
Awww.

Wait did you ever even talk to this chick?

Good song though Smile

duh, of course I talked to her.

Oh, and thanks.



Smile
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July 30th, 2006 at 12:56am
"You're so beautiful, I'm just a fuck-up, what do we even have in commom? "

how many times have i wondered that about myself?
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July 31st, 2006 at 03:33am
thanks, you guys. These comments really encourage me to keep writing.
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July 31st, 2006 at 03:46am
Argh I'm a Pirate:
thanks, you guys. These comments really encourage me to keep writing.


Good. I want you to keep writing. I'm looking forward to reading your future poems.
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August 1st, 2006 at 04:22am
if i still write anymore. GSB kind of took away my life! Very Happy
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Mibba
August 1st, 2006 at 04:59am
I like it. Retard
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August 1st, 2006 at 07:10am
aw, its so pretty.
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August 1st, 2006 at 11:36pm
Thanks! Songwriting is my life, and these comments really brighten up my day.
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August 2nd, 2006 at 12:09am
Not bad, not bad at all. Cool
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