11th Street Kid King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 3645 | August 2nd, 2006 at 12:11pm I finally wrote something after I came back.. hope you like it. It's pretty long.. as usual.
Verses go in no particular order
Like people
Droplets of rain go down
If you can build a harmony
String the necklace of delicate beads
Won't you rest with me
We could talk
In the privacy of all night
When the sun begins its duty
No one will know
With a sigh
Capture a little twinkle
Maybe a smile
No one knows
Of our settling bond
Nothing is accomplished in the daylight
Completion has no ground
If you manage to divert your mind
Shed a few tears
Now that your bones have decayed
But I dare not cover my eyes
There's nothing to see through
When there are no lies
Lost you long ago
In the trees, in the rush of flow
But oh, never mind
Slide, slide
Slide with me
Slip, slip
Drown with me
Die with me
Die with me
No difference between good and bad
A dream and a nightmare is the same
path in disguise
Hard to find the right words
Hard to find the wrong words
It's burning in my throat
Maybe I'll get there, someday
I can see your playful soul
Such childish amusement
A longing churns for the elegance
The simplicity
Maybe I'll get there, someday
Won't you rest with me
We could talk
In the privacy of all night
When the moon is shining bright
When the sun begins its duty
No one will know
No one will bother to probe
Lost you long ago
In the trees, in the rush of flow
But oh, never mind
Slide, slide
Slide with me
Slip, slip
Drown with me
Submerge in the sublime visions
Suffocate in the haze
Die with me
Die with me
A circle
A routine
Wash the ink that's seeped into my skin
Divert your mind from the herd
A circle
A routine
Peel your casing off for me
Die with me
Die with me
What exactly is time?
And what is life?
But oh, never mind. |
Rebel. Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 66
| August 2nd, 2006 at 12:17pm I like it! |
11th Street Kid King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 3645 | August 2nd, 2006 at 12:18pm Thank you.  |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921
| August 3rd, 2006 at 11:44am Wow, I loved that so much. It may have been long-ish, but it kept my attention the whole way through. And that's not easy to do what with my short attention span.  Awesome awesome job. |
11th Street Kid King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 3645 | August 3rd, 2006 at 12:23pm Really? Thanks  I've got a short attention span too. |