Orgy
Geek
Age: 34
Gender: -
Posts: 179 | August 3rd, 2006 at 02:28pm Up till now you have been my best friend
I thought it would last till the very end
but apparently i was very wrong
we have been apart for way to long
it grows more awkward as we talk
the thought of me now makes you balk
there is another that has taken my place
it was done with such haste
why oh why have you shut me out
you have filled me with such doubt
you always forget everything i say
this situation grows worse everyday
now as i struggle not to cling
I feel like a bird with a slipped wing
when i had troubles you were there
you listened as i laid my heart bare
i guess now i will have to try
to let go and to say goodbye
our friendship now is a thing from the past
and i will slowly learn to let go at last |
The Doctor
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 8786
  | August 3rd, 2006 at 02:29pm The rhyme scheme annoyewd be. But I liked it.  |
Orgy
Geek
Age: 34
Gender: -
Posts: 179 | August 3rd, 2006 at 02:30pm thanx =] |
Rhiannon.
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 2999
| August 3rd, 2006 at 02:49pm i liked it, but the ryhmes were somewaht forced, and annoying. but OTHER THAN THAT!!! |
radioactive
Geek
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 338
| August 4th, 2006 at 12:56am i love it =] its very good |
