Rage&Love
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 2462 | August 6th, 2006 at 11:49am ok well im rubbish at writing poems and songs..well serious ones anyways but i can write some when i get really down or whatever so heres one i wrote...
The news, a final blow to my heart,
stricking it deep,
leaving it alone and fearing,
for the next lying creep!
Left here remembering what was,
how your kiss made me forget,
the good and the bad,
now left here to remember the times we had!
Do you even care,
how your words made me feel?
how i believed them once,
now knowing none were real!
So kick me while im down,
leave me here to rot,
regreting every move i made,
...i deserve what i got! |
[Broken Pretty]
Idiot
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 572 | August 6th, 2006 at 09:34pm Do you even care,
how your words made me feel?
i care.
i should tell him i feel after our fight last night.
sorry...
the poem is grouse. |
[Broken Pretty]
Idiot
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 572 | August 6th, 2006 at 09:34pm Do you even care,
how your words made me feel?
i care.
i should tell him i feel after our fight last night.
sorry...
the poem is grouse. means awesome |
Rage&Love
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 2462 | August 7th, 2006 at 05:59am [broken pretty]_.:Do you even care,
how your words made me feel?
i care.
i should tell him i feel after our fight last night.
sorry...
the poem is grouse. means awesome
 thanks  |
newagecarny
Was Here Two Weeks Ago
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 42495
 | August 7th, 2006 at 06:30am The first two stanzas were a lot better than the last two. |
