Nothing Matters

this is my first posted poem, i wrote it about a year and a half ago...

You used to be my hero,
You seemed to be a saint.
You always said you loved me,
Damn, are you ever fake.

You told me that violence wasn't the answer,
Why don't you practice what you preach?
Instead of spreading hate like a cancer.
Such good morals that you teach.

I hear the screams,
And I feel my soul shatter.
You're one twisted little being,
And now nothing matters.

So now my heart is broken,
All I can feel is hate.
Bring back the solace that was.
Don't leave us with this fate.

/end.

wow.
i like it.

Good way to channel anger. I like it.

I didn't like it at all.

By the way 'saint' and 'fake' don't rhyme.
Neither do 'shatter' and 'matters'

mabey they werent sposed to rhyme
not all poems HAVE to rhyme.

its good =] i like it.

radioactive:

not all poems HAVE to rhyme.

No, but if you rhyme half of it and write the other half in some clumsy semi-rhyme, one is bound to wonder, don't you think?

I like the first 3 lines and

You told me that violence wasn't the answer,
Why don't you practice what you preach?

It was okay. I didn't mind the semi-rhymes, admittedly I have a habit of doing it myself when writing in rhyme. Howver, much of it was very choppy, and cliched, but I did like the second verse.