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 | August 7th, 2006 at 08:54am You said you would never leave me as you grabbed my hand,
Baby, why did you let it go,
Falling seven stories,
Keeping secrets from our memories,
Holding on to visions of the past,
Trying to make those moments last,
Never let me go,
It's to late,
Never say goodbye,
things left unsaid are never heard by the dead,
Goodbye my darling,
I'll miss you terribly,
Until this heart stops beating,
And when it's finished breaking,
I'll see you again, wait for me till im there.
I'm a screaming, crying mess,
Why did you leave me.
I'm alone now,
Waiting for you to come get me,
Waiting for the feeling of your icy lips to touch mine again,
Exept this time it will last till life do us part. |
radioactive
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| August 7th, 2006 at 08:54am eh...not that good but..meh its okay =] I tried my best. thats all that really matters. |
radioactive
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| August 7th, 2006 at 09:02am okay...i dont think anyones gonna like it cuz it was written by me and people hate me on here...so yeah.. oh well thats their problem =] |
radioactive
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| August 8th, 2006 at 08:12am okay no one likes this one i kinda figured that. |
Garrett Hanlund
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 | August 8th, 2006 at 08:14am I did rather like it. I think some of the phrases were a touch over used but I did quite like the last line. 
Is it just me, or do you like using the phrase "seven stories"?  |
radioactive
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| August 8th, 2006 at 08:30am yes only because 7 is the first number i usually think of XD or 5...but its rare i say 5 lol |
Orgy
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Posts: 179 | August 8th, 2006 at 04:55pm i loved it!!!!!!!!!!! |
radioactive
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| August 8th, 2006 at 05:53pm i can tell |
