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radioactive
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 | August 4th, 2006 at 05:02am [verse one]
Their wrists sliced to hell
Death is what they try to sell
Hes falling down
Times running out
And she can tell
[chorus]
Falling hard and falling fast
This memory will not last
Promise me you will let go
Promise me you won't forget
Promise me you'll catch me if I JUMP!
[verse two]
She knows this fear of heights wont last much longer
He knows her ghost will come to haunt him
Let this world fall away (Fade away, turn to gray)
Someone save them today
[chorus 2]
Falling hard (say goodbye)
And falling fast (say goodnight)
This memory will not last (wave goodbye)
For the last time, to the life we once lost
[verse three]
She hit the concrete (seven stories high)
He sliced the blue vein (wasn't hard to find)
They never said goodbye (to far, miles apart)
So tragic (never said goodbye)
Teenage suicide (together in the sky)
Wave goodbye, wave goodbye, wave goodbye, wave goodbye. |
newagecarny
Was Here Two Weeks Ago
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 42495
| August 4th, 2006 at 05:03am That makes me think of The Distillers. |
Garrett Hanlund
This Board Is My Home
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 30801
 | August 4th, 2006 at 05:06am That reminded me of that some Evenescence video. |
newagecarny
Was Here Two Weeks Ago
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 42495
| August 4th, 2006 at 05:06am Poseur ™ Loves Steven:That reminded me of that some Evenescence video.
Going Under? |
radioactive
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| August 4th, 2006 at 05:15am Poseur ™ Loves Steven:That reminded me of that some Evenescence video.
how? im confused. can you please explain?? |
Garrett Hanlund
This Board Is My Home
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Gender: Female
Posts: 30801
| August 4th, 2006 at 05:17am *one
and no. It was like, "Bring Me To Life" or something like that. With that one guy from the 12 Stones (or something like that). O_o |
radioactive
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Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 338
| August 4th, 2006 at 05:22am 0.o i love that guys voice.. heh heh |
radioactive
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Age: 32
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| August 4th, 2006 at 05:38am the surprising thing is, is that i wrote this here song allllll by me self =] im very proud of myself right now XD |
symbols?!.
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 32 | August 4th, 2006 at 10:16am It's deep, and ya it kinda does remind me of that Evenescence video. I really liked it. |
radioactive
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Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 338
| August 6th, 2006 at 07:58am my friend read it today...(drummer in my band) and she said it was "fantastic" and shes jealous cuz she didnt write it  |
Rhiannon.
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 2999
| August 6th, 2006 at 08:03am I love it.
just put some music will it and it would be fantastic |
*the*idiot*
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
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Posts: 87 | August 6th, 2006 at 08:43am thats way cool, a bit emo, but still, cool |
Plug In Baby.
Addict
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 11334 | August 6th, 2006 at 08:48am *the*idiot*:thats way cool, a bit emo, but still, cool
o.O I don't think it was emo at all. I found it more to be Evanescence-y or gothic metal, along those lines. I guess it all depends on the singer, what they sing it like.
I think its really good! You'll have to record it when you put music to it, and show us. |
radioactive
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| August 7th, 2006 at 12:26am okay i will just remind me k once i get new equipment and stuff i will JUST FOR YOU GSBIANS!! cuz your cool like that. =] |
Sydney Cloud
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 20
| August 7th, 2006 at 01:31am aww...I like it...
*u* |
radioactive
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Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 338
| August 7th, 2006 at 06:36am see im working on another part to it kinda like a part 2 you know well..you might not but slipknots song vermillion theres part 1 and part 2 part 1 is you know like slipknot loud and awsome and part 2 is acoustic and awsome and i think that if i do something like that it will make this song into kind of a story like thing and it will sound really cool. what do you think? |
Disaster Town[Leto<3]
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
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Posts: 28 | August 7th, 2006 at 03:53pm wow thats really good! i wish i could write like you!  |
Peter Petrelli
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 4161 | August 7th, 2006 at 04:22pm It was okay. Not very special. The opening lines 'Their wrists sliced to hell Death is what they try to sell' was just ridiculous, I'm sorry. The rest wasn't too bad, and yeah, it does have an Evanescence feel to it. I did really like the line 'She hit the concrete (seven stories high)' though, I thought that was pretty good. |
radioactive
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Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 338
| August 8th, 2006 at 08:11am thank you =] |
radioactive
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Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 338
| August 8th, 2006 at 09:50pm no one loves it anymore =[ o wells it lived a short life XD lol |
