peas lover. King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 3502
| July 10th, 2006 at 08:22am But You're Still Alive
When we met, you said we were just the same,
Invisible, forgotten, lost and so afraid.
I trusted you and let you heal my broken heart.
But, now it seems to me our love became a twisted game,
Don't look away, enjoy the view on the wreck you've made.
Until death does us apart.
Once again, I expected a lot and gained nothing but pain.
Once again I trusted and once again, I was failed.
We laughed together, fought together, bled together, all in vain.
All for nothing, cuz you were afraid.
Once again, I opened my heart,
Until death does us apart.
You were afraid,
Afraid to show me you once cared,
To tell me I was the one,
To tell me you knew I was scared
Now it's too late - the damage is done.
Until death does us apart, but you're still alive. |
peas lover. King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 3502
| July 12th, 2006 at 10:29am that bad? |
CrazyEyes Geek
 Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 112 | July 12th, 2006 at 05:52pm No, actually I liked it. |
peas lover. King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 3502
| July 12th, 2006 at 06:18pm Why, thank you.  |
Orgy Geek
 Age: 34 Gender: - Posts: 179 | July 13th, 2006 at 07:50pm thass kool.....really kool =D |
peas lover. King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 3502
| July 14th, 2006 at 06:01am thankies =] |
Tahm York This Board Is My Home
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 | July 14th, 2006 at 06:03am We laughed together, fought together, bled together, all in vain.
All for nothing, cuz you were afraid.
those are my favorite lines. but the whole poem was good |
peas lover. King For A Couple Of Days
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| July 14th, 2006 at 09:24am thanks! |
Des Geek
 Age: 34 Gender: - Posts: 125 | July 14th, 2006 at 09:33am That's really good. |
peas lover. King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 3502
| July 14th, 2006 at 12:39pm thankies... |
punky angel Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 13 | July 14th, 2006 at 01:31pm that was real cool well done |
peas lover. King For A Couple Of Days
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| August 6th, 2006 at 06:11am thanks... |
DaveyHavok666 Geek
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 250 | August 10th, 2006 at 12:37am wo0t AWESOME!!!!! *10* PM me when you have more written down! |
peas lover. King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 3502
| August 10th, 2006 at 04:20am Okay I will, thanks for the compliments... |