Away From You

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rage;love;clark
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rage;love;clark
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Posts: 494
August 10th, 2006 at 03:51pm
I give up
Throw in the towel
I’m sure you are all
Happy now
The way you
Treat me is not sublime
You do this to me
Every time

And I
Fly
Away from you
And I
Fly
Away from you

I killed it all
I know I did
I spilled its blood
On the pavement
I resurrect
All the days
The days that went by
In a haze

And I
Fly
Away from you
And I
Fly
Away from you

And I
Fly
Away from you
And I
Fly
Away from you
rollerpig
GSBitch
rollerpig
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 62283
August 10th, 2006 at 04:06pm
It's okay.

I don't really like it.
peas lover.
King For A Couple Of Days
peas lover.
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Gender: Female
Posts: 3502

Mibba
August 10th, 2006 at 04:32pm
I liked cuz it feels...I dunno...Sincere - in a lack of a better word.

It' s not that well worded, but I still like it. I just think you can do better cuz it seems to me you have the talent.
just_call_me_dookie
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just_call_me_dookie
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Gender: Female
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Mibba
August 10th, 2006 at 04:36pm
*claps* very well written. i like it.
rage;love;clark
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rage;love;clark
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August 10th, 2006 at 04:45pm
Daddy's little dead girl:
I liked cuz it feels...I dunno...Sincere - in a lack of a better word.

It' s not that well worded, but I still like it. I just think you can do better cuz it seems to me you have the talent.


it's good with guitar,,,trust me lol

thank you though
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