All I Am Is The Ice In Your Cocktail Drink

I wrote this about those smug, snobby people that we all know and hate. I wrote this about how some people just put down others because it makes them feel better, but how it never actually works. Does that make any sense? Oh well, please tell me what you think.

All I am is the ice in your cocktail drink
You'd like me if you thought I was in style
No matter how expensive you are
I don't see how your life is worthwhile

You laugh and joke and smile a lot
I wonder what you're really thinking
I can't say I really look up to you
You're blissfully unaware you're sinking

How do you feel when you go home alone?
You slip your security under the bed
Come back the next night no wiser at all
Your thoughts don't even fill your head

(chorus)
Look down on me, but you're as low as can be
At least I've salvaged my pride
You are nothing more than who you ignore
But I won't tell you about reality

I am the one you've always denounced
Who you laughed at to fit the mold
The mold has changed and you're stuck alone
You realize your jokes are all old

All I am is the ice in your cocktail drink
You'd like me if you could admit to it
No matter how cheap and gaudy you are
All the obscenities seem to fit

How do you feel when you go home alone?
You slip your security under the bed
Come back the next night no wiser at all
Your thoughts don't even fill your head

(chorus)

Is it a song?

I like it.

OHmy, thats AMAZING.

Thanks very much to both of you. Yes it is a song, but I haven't quite gotten the chords worked out yet.

rejectallamerican:

Thanks very much to both of you. Yes it is a song, but I haven't quite gotten the chords worked out yet.

tis beautiful.
i wish i played guitar. T_T

Yeah I'm not too good at it, but it's really fun and I'm learning. And it's helpful when it comes to writing music!