leaving out of town tonight (to new yourk city)

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billiejoeblowjob
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August 14th, 2006 at 12:10am
someitmes i want to run away
amd never see your face
sometimes i want to take that train
out of the city (out to the city)
and cry my heart out
something pretty
falls from her eyes
stains the sheets so bright (red)
she cries (she cries)
because of me
she falls deadbeat
and here i am (safe in the city)
leaving her a message in the rain
pouring bullets on my face
to come here (with me) and
leave her country scene
out to new york city
to be with me forever, live with me
(be with me forever, leave for me)

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i imagine it to be a song, sorry, and the parts in parantheisis are the background singer.... ^^U

oh yeah and the theme came from someone's sig here on GSB, admittedly. if you read this thanks for the idea. ^^;;
Sara.
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August 14th, 2006 at 12:13am
Good. I really liked it.


But It's spelt New York Wink
billiejoeblowjob
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August 14th, 2006 at 12:30am
*bangs head on keyboard*
i can't believe i did that--- i must've hit two keys when i was typing sorry. ^^U
billiejoeblowjob
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August 14th, 2006 at 05:20pm
billiejoeblowjob:
oh yeah and the theme came from someone's sig here on GSB, admittedly. if you read this thanks for the idea. ^^;;


okay, here's their username (sorry for emabarassing you) but it was Hardcore Panda!!1 and it's beautiful by the way, don't change it. Very Happy )
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Mibba
August 14th, 2006 at 05:37pm
That was actually pretty good. I have to admit that when you PM'd me, I thought you were one of those plaguerizing little shits. XD Buttt, you did a fair job, and I can imagine it as a catchy song. So Up

By the way, in case you're interested, my sig is lyrics to a song called Eating the Porridge, Killing the Bears by HeavyHeavyLowLow. You might want to check it out. They're grindcore though, so you probably won't like it. =/
billiejoeblowjob
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August 14th, 2006 at 06:58pm
Hardcore Panda!!1:
That was actually pretty good. I have to admit that when you PM'd me, I thought you were one of those plaguerizing little shits. XD Buttt, you did a fair job, and I can imagine it as a catchy song. So Up

By the way, in case you're interested, my sig is lyrics to a song called Eating the Porridge, Killing the Bears by HeavyHeavyLowLow. You might want to check it out. They're grindcore though, so you probably won't like it. =/


Thanks. ^_^ I tried to check out the song though and found it (a live version though....). It was pretty good but I couldn't really hear what the singer was saying over the guitar. It was only about 1:35 too, so I'm not sure if it's just a short song or what. Confused
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Mibba
August 14th, 2006 at 09:05pm
billiejoeblowjob:
Hardcore Panda!!1:
That was actually pretty good. I have to admit that when you PM'd me, I thought you were one of those plaguerizing little shits. XD Buttt, you did a fair job, and I can imagine it as a catchy song. So Up

By the way, in case you're interested, my sig is lyrics to a song called Eating the Porridge, Killing the Bears by HeavyHeavyLowLow. You might want to check it out. They're grindcore though, so you probably won't like it. =/


Thanks. ^_^ I tried to check out the song though and found it (a live version though....). It was pretty good but I couldn't really hear what the singer was saying over the guitar. It was only about 1:35 too, so I'm not sure if it's just a short song or what. Confused
Linky to the myspace And I think the song's pretty short, but I can't be bothered to listen to it again at the moment. Laughing
billiejoeblowjob
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August 14th, 2006 at 10:12pm
Hardcore Panda!!1:
billiejoeblowjob:
Hardcore Panda!!1:
That was actually pretty good. I have to admit that when you PM'd me, I thought you were one of those plaguerizing little shits. XD Buttt, you did a fair job, and I can imagine it as a catchy song. So Up

By the way, in case you're interested, my sig is lyrics to a song called Eating the Porridge, Killing the Bears by HeavyHeavyLowLow. You might want to check it out. They're grindcore though, so you probably won't like it. =/


Thanks. ^_^ I tried to check out the song though and found it (a live version though....). It was pretty good but I couldn't really hear what the singer was saying over the guitar. It was only about 1:35 too, so I'm not sure if it's just a short song or what. Confused
Linky to the myspace And I think the song's pretty short, but I can't be bothered to listen to it again at the moment. Laughing


It was definitely good but I'm not sure that was what I'd found earlier. (It seemed in Japanese but I dunno.....) Anywhoozers, I couldn't understand this one much better and yeah you are right I'm not too accustomed to this sort of music but hey at least it's not rap--- so I don't mind. Very Happy
Sooo... are they famous or anything? (Just wondering why I've never heard them....)
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Mibba
August 15th, 2006 at 11:10am
Nooo, they're about as far from famous as you can get. Laughing I heard them through a friend who got into them.
billiejoeblowjob
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August 15th, 2006 at 12:16pm
Hardcore Panda!!1:
Nooo, they're about as far from famous as you can get. Laughing I heard them through a friend who got into them.

*nods* Sounds like they can get all the fans that they can get then, eh? Very Happy (I skipped some of their other songs but I should check them out then.) Do you know a link to their lyrics? (It's hard to understand them--- let alone anyone who screams....)
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Mibba
August 15th, 2006 at 12:24pm
Lyricsss

Anywayy, we should stop spamming here because it's a section for poetry. Wink
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August 15th, 2006 at 03:41pm
I like it. I wouldn't mind some capitalizing next time. xD
billiejoeblowjob
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August 15th, 2006 at 08:32pm
So damn Ugly So damn Cute:
I like it. I wouldn't mind some capitalizing next time. xD

ehh.... well i like how e.e. cummings (or what's his face, i forget...) never does and thought it was better that way... that's just me. Razz
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August 17th, 2006 at 12:48pm
i loved it! ur a goos poet person ^.^ great job biznatch! Up
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