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DudeO
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 31
Gender: Male
Posts: 2543
 | August 14th, 2006 at 11:32pm Trying to write something beautiful
Try to create something useful
Trying to make something truely exciting
but I've got writers block.
In my hand a pen lays unmoving,
a page on my table remains untouched,
My eyelids are drooping from so much thinking
Cause now I have writers block
My leg grows numb from my awkward position
And pins and needles run right through
And I'm getting a tumor from pulling my hair out
Because of my writers block
So I rip up my page thats remained untouched
and I throw the pen at my computer screen
And I go out to walk off my throbbing leg
Pissed off at my writers block
And what happens then as I slam my door,
a fresh idea pops up and stands tall
and as I open my door to find a new pen,
I ralize I dont feel like writing at all.
DONT ASK I wass bored. |
Arcane-Inamorata
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 3278
| August 14th, 2006 at 11:41pm I love it. Like, SO much.
I know EXACTLY how you feel.
It's been months since i've written an entire poem... not including school |
DudeO
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 31
Gender: Male
Posts: 2543
| August 14th, 2006 at 11:43pm Mike_is_sexy_86:I love it. Like, SO much.
I know EXACTLY how you feel.
It's been months since i've written an entire poem... not including school
Lol. Thank god, I'm not alone! |
Franny.
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 5246 | August 15th, 2006 at 01:58am i mainly like the last verse. it's a pretty good poem, some words could be changed to make the poem flow better, but it's good, i like it =) |
billiejoeblowjob
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 42 | August 15th, 2006 at 02:13am twas nice. (i feel that way ALL the fricken time!!!  ) |
newagecarny
Was Here Two Weeks Ago
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 42495
| August 15th, 2006 at 06:01am It would have been better with some more metaphores. |
paper shoes
This Board Is My Home
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 34269 | August 19th, 2006 at 02:00pm Ella:It would have been better with some more metaphores. Metaphors aren't the answer to everything, you know? |
rollerpig
GSBitch
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 62283 | August 19th, 2006 at 02:04pm Harlequin Girl:Ella:It would have been better with some more metaphores. Metaphors aren't the answer to everything, you know?
LOL
Yeah, maybe not when you have a writers block =| |
bratbassist
Idiot
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 510 | August 20th, 2006 at 08:19am thats awsome, You know exactly what it feals like, and put it great. |
Remarkable Rocket
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 5761 | August 20th, 2006 at 07:14pm Ella:It would have been better with some more metaphores.
Ella, you ALL over metaphores. |
Love my insanity
Jackass
Age: 93
Gender: Female
Posts: 1591 | August 20th, 2006 at 07:21pm Haha. I know how it feels. Or you lose the thought. I like it, but i hate writers block. |
watch me fade
Idiot
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 936 | August 20th, 2006 at 07:35pm That was great. honestly. it was SO good. usually for me i slam the door... a thought comes... i sit at the table and i either lost the thought or i can't put it into words. |
Goodbye, Norma Jeane
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 4724 | August 20th, 2006 at 07:41pm So I rip up my page thats remained untouched
and I throw the pen at my computer screen
And I go out to walk off my throbbing leg
Pissed off at my writers block
Favorite stanza
i like it. I can definitely relate. |
BREASTS
Idiot
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 973 | August 20th, 2006 at 07:50pm Arghh, Whether writing a poem, story, or song, writers block has been taking over my head for weeks now. Maybe that poem kinda helped. |
