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Board index - Your poetry

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lyrical_mess Falling In Love With The Board Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 5278	August 21st, 2006 at 10:37am Sorry. No Title. Scarred by my repentance Repayment for my sin No more will I cry for acceptance That's not my reason to live Close your eyes to accept my offering Let future mistakes be undone Put out thy hands in prayer As I pour unto them My blood Punishment I do deserve As a fire deserves to burn Reacquaint myself with my misery Sinners rarely do learn Humiliated though repentance I've commited more than one sin I leave this world with reluctance But I have no reason to live. Anyway, the poem doesn't really have a title. And making one up is hard. I'd love to know what you think. It's pretty old, actually. But I want Inari's opinion. Cuz she's speshul.
Inari King For A Couple Of Days Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538	August 21st, 2006 at 11:35am Wow, someone wants my opinion. That's just weird. It shows potential, honey. A little clichéd but it's nothing that you can't work on. I loved: Punishment I do deserve As a fire deserves to burn Reacquaint myself with my misery Sinners rarely do learn Hope you'll post more of your stuff soon.
lyrical_mess Falling In Love With The Board Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 5278	August 21st, 2006 at 12:50pm Dude. You're like, the...Poetry God of GSB or something. People worship you. And I think I used a line from one of your poems in my story...hehe. I have to check which one though.
Inari King For A Couple Of Days Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538	August 21st, 2006 at 12:50pm Poetry God of GSB?
lyrical_mess Falling In Love With The Board Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 5278	August 21st, 2006 at 12:53pm Yeah...as weird as that sounds. Seriously. Ask anyone on the poetry boards. They bow down to you.
Inari King For A Couple Of Days Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538	August 21st, 2006 at 12:54pm Dude. I'm too lazy to be God lol. But thank you... Woah.
lyrical_mess Falling In Love With The Board Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 5278	August 21st, 2006 at 12:55pm Heh. You're welcome. I think Gods have the right to be lazy. I would love to be a god. Just sit on my ass all day and stare at happy little mortals. Ahh...that's the life. I think this is spam. O_o. Spamming my own thread.
Inari King For A Couple Of Days Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538	August 21st, 2006 at 12:56pm Oops. Back to commenting people. This is God speaking
lyrical_mess Falling In Love With The Board Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 5278	August 21st, 2006 at 12:58pm Yay for Inari God! Whoop. And thanks for the comment. Actually, this poem was made up in the middle of the night. And chock-full of big R words. But I couldn't remember most of it by morning. This is the remains. hehe.

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