The Doctor
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 8786
  | August 21st, 2006 at 11:13am Need the strength to carry my own
crucifix. I watch the angels gleefully
pass me by. I try so damn hard and
again I saw in the mud by own reflection.
Come on; help this weight off my shoulders.
Give me the time of day. If you can't
understand why I am the way I am,
then what's the point in making a stand?
Stone my head and let lions latch onto
my skin. Just another gladiator
fighting the inner Christian. But why why why
must I take the fall? Heaven? Heaven's no place
for a guy like me. I'll let the brimstone
boil my brains into molasses, get off
your ass Jesus and tie it to the gate.
Any commiseration? Consideration futile?
My life wrong or just damned facile? |
Inari
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 37
Gender: Female
Posts: 2538 | August 21st, 2006 at 11:36am I really liked that.
Blunt and beautiful. |
lyrical_mess
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 5278
| August 21st, 2006 at 01:07pm I loved that. I liked the way you ended each line and started the next. It brings kind of a sharp, abrupt beat to it. I read that out to myself like, 3 times for fun. I'm a little weird. Hehe. But I like it. Very frank...to the point. |
