Writers Block Sure Does Suck...

sorry, if you want 'flow' or whatever but i dont think this does, but i wrote it anyways.

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Writers Block Sure Does Suck..

the blood driops from the shot gun wound
and you know you'll never see me again.
never is nothing compares to how much ill feel tomorrow
from everything you meant to be with me to nothing ill be without you.

this writers block sure can suck for you:
ill never talk the way i did,
ill never write the way i was
ill never again tell you how much everything you did made me grin
guess this what happens whenpart of you dies.
yes, thats right:
being with you makes me want to DIE!
its not what you do
its what i do that makes us hurt then why is it i wish i was dead?
i wodner will he eventually understand?

Just corrected the spelling and grammer for you:

The blood drips from the shot gun wound;
and you know you'll never see me again.
Never is nothing compared to how much I'll feel tomorrow;
from everything you meant to be with me to nothing I'll be without you.

This writer's block sure can suck for you:
I'll never talk the way I did,
I'll never write the way I was,
I'll never again tell you how much everything you did made me grin
I guess this is what happens when part of you dies.
Yes, thats right:
Being with you makes me want to DIE!
It's not what you do;
It's what I do that makes us hurt- then why is it I wish I was dead?
I wonder- Will he eventually understand?


Other comments:
I must admit, I do like this, and I can understand exactly what you're saying, but I'm not sure about the last two lines, but thats just me thinking it's not your fault I love the first four lines, they're my favourite- they just go together so well.

Let me know if this helps, or if I'm completely wrong!