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Inari King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538 | August 27th, 2006 at 06:21pm
A one-worded title.
What is happening to me?
There's nothing here for us but open roads and empty dreams,
sleepless nights, vacant sleep beneath covers torn with trying.
City skylines only conceal the sunrise trying to burn it down.
What are efforts in towns cramped with mistakes and falsities?
Just breaths against the window turning to steam in the sun.
I'm told I was meant for better than this excuse could allow.
Maybe for once I'll believe what they say and tempt destiny.
This is another tale of a teenage joyride in technicolour.
Fill this space beside me and we'll rip reality at the seams.
There's enough space for you and all of our possibilities
in this beat-up car that we're chasing fading horizons in.
They never seem to get closer but it's next stop ignorance
when there's another run-down engine droning in this chest.
And if the road keeps on yawning, then we'll keep on driving
with one foot to the ignition, one palm pressed to the past.
We'll suppress the skeletons in our suitcases until we reach
some steadier ground than what we've been standing on so far.
Your feet in my lap, we drive away the time we've been wasting.
This is a dreamer's day out behind the wheel and a conscience. |
Arcane-Inamorata King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 3278
| August 27th, 2006 at 06:34pm Wow... where do you come up with this stuff?
It's incredible.
I'm your biggest fan lol |
michaeldirnt Idiot
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 737 | August 27th, 2006 at 06:36pm wow that was incredible
you are definately THE best poet on GSB and you are one of my favourite poets ever |
davey jones. Falling In Love With The Board
 Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 7018
 | August 27th, 2006 at 07:09pm Wow.
Inari, that was beautiful.
Your mind is as vibrant as the poem you've just written. |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921
| August 27th, 2006 at 07:56pm Inariiiii, your poem is beautiful as all hell.
Or actually, wouldn't it make more sense to say as heaven or something? XD Let's try this again. Rewind, Panda style!
Inariiiii, your poem is beautiful as all heaven.
That's better.  |
robotchicken. Falling In Love With The Board
 Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 8423
| August 27th, 2006 at 09:55pm Absolutely wonderful!
I loved all of it :]
very nice. |
Inari King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538 | August 28th, 2006 at 04:23am
Thank you guys.
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[Broken Pretty] Idiot
![[Broken Pretty]](/data/board-avatars/empty.gif) Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 572 | August 28th, 2006 at 05:16am wow.
amazing, seriously.
you're talent just awestrucks me. |
peas lover. King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 3502
| August 28th, 2006 at 05:23am Inari, really?! ONE WORDED TITLE?!? :
I loved the poem...I just LOVE your style. |
snowcherry King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 3912 | August 28th, 2006 at 08:51am That's just cool, really.
It has such a let's-just-run-spirit, if you know what I mean.
It's cool. |
rollerpig GSBitch
 Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 62283 | August 28th, 2006 at 08:53am pretty cool.  |
BiLly-JoSsOuLmAtE Idiot
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 568 | August 28th, 2006 at 09:23am 
I like it! |
Inari King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538 | August 28th, 2006 at 01:00pm snowcherry:It has such a let's-just-run-spirit, if you know what I mean.
That's exactly what I want to do.
Anyone wanna join me?
Thank you everyone else.  |
M.A.N.D.A. Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 7 | August 28th, 2006 at 01:47pm You have such great writing skills. So literate and beautiful. I love that poem, definatley a good one!
Seriously though, AWESOME poem. Kudos. |
Inari King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538 | August 28th, 2006 at 01:51pm Thank you darling.
I really appreciate it. |
radioactive Geek
 Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 338
| August 29th, 2006 at 07:01am I love it. But thats just me. =]
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Inari King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538 | August 29th, 2006 at 07:09am Thank you, sweetie. |
Peter Petrelli King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 4161 | August 29th, 2006 at 11:46am Gorgeous. I've been missing your poetry while I've been away. |
GrEeNdAyMuSiC77 Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 95 | August 29th, 2006 at 04:45pm wonderful! ... there are so many talented people at this website |