City Life/Dizziness

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Rockaway Beach
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Rockaway Beach
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 1279
September 1st, 2006 at 12:57pm
Eyes that arrange numbers
Wind that grips past branches as if
Treason itself were on its tail
Tales of rabbits in the headlights
of careless foxes caught in the crossfire.

Embed, imprint a code unto my hand
Stars so bright they shine their image
Never pulling away from your eyes
But this city life i've grown accustomed to
Leaves ever a trail to fathom;
worn and used debris.

The grass is always greener
The water always looks mud from above
Refreshing is the falling of daisies
Unto the dying field, my subconscious
Once a blazing field of fire
Twirling lights and ringing resonance
'But everything will be alright
if we just keep this fire burning.'

Dizzyness ensues
Unto the beach
Out of the water
And into your reach
Desperate, perhaps
But who am i to preach?
Of sane and insanity,
life and it's cure.
Peter Petrelli
King For A Couple Of Days
Peter Petrelli
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 4161
September 1st, 2006 at 01:08pm
I loved the last verse. Pretty awesome Very Happy
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King For A Couple Of Days
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Mibba
September 1st, 2006 at 01:12pm
That last verse was absolutely wonderful. The whole thing was rully good though, of course. One of the best poems I've read recently.
Inari
King For A Couple Of Days
Inari
Age: 37
Gender: Female
Posts: 2538
September 1st, 2006 at 02:19pm
That's so beautiful.
I loved every word of it.
Rockaway Beach
Jackass
Rockaway Beach
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 1279
September 1st, 2006 at 02:32pm
Thank you Very Happy
michaeldirnt
Idiot
michaeldirnt
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September 1st, 2006 at 02:46pm
that was amazing
i loved it
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