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 | September 6th, 2006 at 07:49am Mommy, your scaring me,
Why do you speak of these things?
I know Uncles gone,
And Daddy is mean,
And I dont keep my room clean,
And the house is a mess,
We have no food to eat,
But Mommy we lost Uncle that way,
Please dont speak of killing yourself,
Think of me,
Think of your kids,
All of us need you,
In a certain special way,
And without you,
I'd go crazy,
I'm too young to take care of my baby sisters,
I'm only 14!
Mommy please dont do this,
Your fucking scaring me,
Please just calm down,
Everything will be okay,
Everything will go back right,
Lets never speak of this again,
I dont care if your still talking,
This conversation must end,
I don't wanna lose you,
Because then i'll lose myself,
Mommy please,
Your the only one keeping me here,
I'm sorry i'm not perfect,
And I don't do everything you say,
But please Mommy,
Please,
If you just drop this i'll change my ways,
And we can all be a family again,
Mommy don't leave me,
Mommy don't lie,
Look me in my fucking eyes and say you wont commit suicide!
I already lost my uncle,
And my best friend,
I don't need to lose you,
Your life shall never end that way,
NEVER NEVER NEVER!
Please mommy,
Please,
I love you too much.
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Based on true events.
RIP Jason Wright
I never wanna put my mommys name by those three letters...never ever, and she doesn't seem to realize. |
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| September 6th, 2006 at 07:54am Like it?
Hate it?
Tell me, please, dont be afraid to speak your mind thier your words. |
Sylar
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Posts: 5703 | September 6th, 2006 at 08:29am I love the idea and how you worded everything, but I'm real big on stanzas and rhyming SO that could be worked on.
If I was giving you something out of ten, I'd give you and eight sweetheart. |
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| September 6th, 2006 at 08:30am =] yay. |
Meski
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 | September 6th, 2006 at 08:35am Holy shit, that almost made me cry. I'm very sorry for your uncle. That was a very good poem. Keep writing. |
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| September 6th, 2006 at 08:37am Thanks. |
Meski
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| September 6th, 2006 at 08:39am No Problem |
newagecarny
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| September 6th, 2006 at 08:50am *you're |
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| September 6th, 2006 at 08:53am ...Heh yeah...I never can get that right... |
