The Latest Plague
Falling In Love With The Board
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Posts: 6640 | September 6th, 2006 at 02:49pm Just a general thing I wrote about my hate for the lovely fakes of this world. Enjoy, I guess.
No pain, no gain
Do you dream about fame?
Or would your face be young and fake?
No fight, no right
Is your attitude too tight?
Or are you opting for give or take?
Dont you understand
We bleed the same blood
But we dont bleed the same
Human?
Hardly
What's human about you?
I fit the mould perfectly
I jolt right into shape
Am I pretty enough now?
AM I PRETTY ENOUGH NOW?
No gain, no pain
Do you cry in the rain
Or would your make up ruin your skin
No fight, no right
Do you cry at night
Or would your self respect wear thin
Dont you understand
We bleed the same blood
But we wont bleed the same
Human?
I wish
What's human about you?
I fit the mould perfectly
I slot right into place
Am I pretty enough now?
AM I PRETTY ENOUGH NOW?
Am I fake enough now?
All comments accepted as long as the negative are constructive. |
Inari
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 37
Gender: Female
Posts: 2538 | September 6th, 2006 at 02:51pm I actually really liked that.
There was something about your style and the wording that really appealed to me. |
The Latest Plague
Falling In Love With The Board
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Gender: -
Posts: 6640 | September 6th, 2006 at 02:57pm Aw thankyou |
Emo Orange Bunneh Ears
Geek
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 433 | September 6th, 2006 at 03:03pm hmm.. pretty awesome.. i like it |
radioactive
Geek
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 338
 | September 6th, 2006 at 10:51pm flyday:cool i like it.
=] |
razzledgirl
Jackass
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 1491
| September 7th, 2006 at 12:36am even though that was really........i dunno i liked it somehow |
Squishy Cool
Idiot
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 614 | September 7th, 2006 at 12:49am Oh, I love this =D
I could really picture it as a screamo song!
And I can totally relate to the words. It's wonderful. <3 |
ellie ex-friend
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 7772 | September 7th, 2006 at 12:01pm AWW BABY YOU'RE WRITING POEMS! I love it. |
The Latest Plague
Falling In Love With The Board
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Gender: -
Posts: 6640 | September 7th, 2006 at 02:03pm !!!SaMs0nYtE!!!:even though that was really........i dunno i liked it somehow
That's fine, thanks but just explain to me what you meant by the "even though that was really......."
Sorry I'm just looking at points I can use to make my writing better, it's not a demand
Squishy Cool:Oh, I love this =D
I could really picture it as a screamo song!
And I can totally relate to the words. It's wonderful. <3
Thanks, I kinda had a screamo tune in my head
Thanks everyone, nice to have stuff appreciated  |
Megan Yo.
Jackass
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Gender: -
Posts: 1309 | September 9th, 2006 at 12:49am i really like it good job. |
