A love gone

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bkwrm37[Duckie!!]
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bkwrm37[Duckie!!]
Age: 31
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September 9th, 2006 at 07:10pm
I remember that day, I remember it well.
You left, leaving me in hell.
I know it's a bad word, but big deal.
This is how I truly feel.

You'll never know the way I suffer,
trying to get through from one day to another.
For you're gone and now happy.
But you leave me alone with Frankie.

The pain fills my heart and soul.
Time has now taken it's toll.
You're gone and you'll never come back.
Now to me the world is black.
The Rev
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The Rev
Age: 38
Gender: Male
Posts: 14004
September 9th, 2006 at 09:43pm
i didn't really like the start of it,
but i do like the last part.

good job
bkwrm37[Duckie!!]
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bkwrm37[Duckie!!]
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Gender: Female
Posts: 200
September 9th, 2006 at 09:44pm
Thank you.
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