Introduction [i]

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The Doctor
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The Doctor
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September 11th, 2006 at 11:11am
Mmkay, new project. I am gonna write a series of peoms...that tell a story. Like a poetic version of a concept album. Chaa.

Procastination - Introduction {i}

Absolution is for the weakminded.
Coloured filters in our irises,
nothing is as it seems and disbelieve
a child of excellence will be concieved.

Don't cry about you pain and suffering,
the sulphur rain will wash it away.
Don't whine about the misery on the earth,
soon you will join the army of hell.

The hypocrites walk the earth and
twist my imagination. Foul air spews
froth from chimneys. Hold my hand
dear monster and hold your breath,
count to ten and watch the world
dissolve around you.

Living in quiet hostels and violent homes,
begging for Mother dear to let you do
what you need to do, she doesn't listen,
no one listens, I am the wallpaper.

This is the story between life and death,
good and evil and all that neurotica inbetween.
My name is Joan, a small time lunatic,
suicide kissed and abused, ready to claim back
the broken homes and the broken souls.
michaeldirnt
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michaeldirnt
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September 11th, 2006 at 11:13am
That is amazing, i cant wait for the rest Smile
Inari
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Inari
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September 11th, 2006 at 12:37pm
Wow.
I love that so much I can't even express it.
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Idiot
[Your Best Mistake]
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September 11th, 2006 at 12:54pm
Woah. I loved it.
Peter Petrelli
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Peter Petrelli
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September 12th, 2006 at 02:17pm
I loved it, it had a raw edge and the language you used was fantastic.
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