Vampiric Acid
Idiot
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Posts: 926 | September 16th, 2006 at 04:45am *Questions of Happiness*
If you were near would I be,
Happy for the world to see?
Would I finally feel like me?
The happiest I can be?
Would my worries disapear?
Would you melt away my fears?
Wipe away my falling tears?
Let my pain fill your ears?
Will you always be there,
When I need someone to care?
Hug me tight, stroke my hair,
Be that guy I know is rare?
Will you receive the love I give?
Will I make you love to live?
Will you returnt the love I give?
Make it worth it to live?
Do you know you keep me smiling?
Your humour keeps me laughing,
I cant believe this is happening.
Because for you I am falling.
I feel somehow with you I've won.
You are my sunless sun.
I know with you I've won.
I think you might be the one.
comments please...
and please be honest... |
Vampiric Acid
Idiot
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 926 | September 17th, 2006 at 01:37am So this is what Happiness feels like...
Answers of Happiness
I know that if you were here,
All my pain would desapear.
All my hurts and all my fears,
Would be gone if you were here.
I just can't wait to see,
Just how happy I can be.
I will finally get to feel like me,
Happy for the world to see.
I know that you'll be there,
When I need someone to care.
Hug me tight, stroke my hair,
You are that guy I know is rare.
I have so much love to give,
You make me love to live.
So take the love I give,
Make me love to live.
I know you will keep me smiling,
Happy, lustful, laughing.
I can't believe this is happening,
Because for you I'm falling.
I know somehow with you I've won,
When its all said and done.
I hope you are the one,
My sunless sun. |
Melissa.
Jackass
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 1260 | September 17th, 2006 at 07:52pm Wow. Good job.  |
Toxic Teeth
Idiot
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 645
 | September 17th, 2006 at 07:59pm BEAUTIFUL.  |
Michake
Geek
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 295 | September 17th, 2006 at 08:14pm both are insanely amazing!!! |
Vampiric Acid
Idiot
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Posts: 926 | September 17th, 2006 at 08:26pm thanx so much...
i just wrote them both one yesterday and one the day before...
i think htey are like the first of my happy poems...
so its all new to me...
thans so much again... |
Miss_Minority039
Geek
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 332
 | September 17th, 2006 at 08:33pm oh |
love.
King For A Couple Of Days
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Posts: 2844 | September 17th, 2006 at 08:34pm one word. beautiful. i heart it<3 |
Vampiric Acid
Idiot
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Posts: 926 | September 18th, 2006 at 08:15am thanx...*blushes* |
Goodbye, Norma Jeane
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 4724 | September 18th, 2006 at 08:39am 
I like it! |
Vampiric Acid
Idiot
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Posts: 926 | September 18th, 2006 at 08:54am
glad you all like it...
than you... |
The Doctor
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 8786
| September 18th, 2006 at 12:16pm I like it, but the rhyme scheme was a tad repeatitive. But hey, it's still damn good.  |
Vampiric Acid
Idiot
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Gender: -
Posts: 926 | September 18th, 2006 at 01:44pm thanx..
yah its pt.1 and 2
so i wnated them like that... |
