Bang Bang, Bye Bye

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Miss Misfit
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Miss Misfit
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September 21st, 2006 at 04:19pm
If I open my blood shot eyes I can see you. If I open my broken heart I can feel you.
I want to grab on to your lipstick and perfume soaked collar and pull you down to my level and my feeling of pain.
You ask me "whats wrong?" Its a disturbing voice of fake sympathy. You seem a little to concerend, thats how I can tell your lying.
The only way you would ever understand is if I prove to you, I just dont have the corage to do somthing like that.
So I keep my feelings to myself. and let you carry on with your unfaithful deeds of lust.
as if by magic the word "Liar." Escapes from my lips. I never told my lips to move, never told my mouth to speak.
Its as if the words I speak are like a bullet from a gun, Killing you everytime I utter another insult. I have no control at all when the I pull the trigger. when I open my mouth.

Bang bang...
Bye bye Love...
tomamazon
GSBitch
tomamazon
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Mibba Blog
September 21st, 2006 at 04:23pm
More like a letter than a poem

Think
Miss Misfit
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Miss Misfit
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September 21st, 2006 at 04:28pm
Falling For GSB.:
More like a letter than a poem

Think


wasnt really inteading it to be a poem...
Peter Petrelli
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Peter Petrelli
Age: 35
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September 22nd, 2006 at 11:32am
Miss Misfit:
wasnt really inteading it to be a poem...


'Your Poetry' is a bit of a give away really.

The content was good, I really liked it. But it was a little difficult to read.
Addison Montgomery.
Falling In Love With The Board
Addison Montgomery.
Age: 30
Gender: Female
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Mibba Blog
September 22nd, 2006 at 11:39am
Falling For GSB.:
More like a letter than a poem

Think
That's true.
Addison Montgomery.
Falling In Love With The Board
Addison Montgomery.
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Gender: Female
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Mibba Blog
September 22nd, 2006 at 11:41am
Miss Misfit:
Falling For GSB.:
More like a letter than a poem

Think


wasnt really inteading it to be a poem...
The poetry thread sorta gives it away.
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