I got pwned
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 64 | September 21st, 2006 at 09:28pm My paper heart is beating
My paper soul is bleeding
My life is is fading away
This is the lfie I'll stay
My paper lolve has gone
He's left and moved on
I'm stuck back here in the past
I'm the only, I'm the last
All that I have left of him
Is this lvoe note he's given
But my love came to a lack
And he is never coming back |
Dead End Girl
Addict
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 10219 | September 21st, 2006 at 09:30pm The rhyming makes it sound forced.
And there are some spellling mistakes too ^^; |
I got pwned
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 64 | September 21st, 2006 at 09:36pm gah i justnoticed.
x_X |
newagecarny
Was Here Two Weeks Ago
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 42495
 | September 22nd, 2006 at 12:13pm Cliché. |
