rage;love;clark
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Posts: 494 | September 22nd, 2006 at 10:05pm I was born to fuck you up
Raised to walk the strut
Learned to trust nobody and never could get enough
Watching you lie in fear
This becomes my career
Seeing you die inside is sensation for those held dear
Ruin your life again
When will this fucker end
Listening to the words these wounds you caused will never mend
Welcome the industry
To the epiphany
Epiphany in context the way it’s meant to be
revolution of sorts
We’re going off course
The more I fucking scream my voice is gettin horse
Settin the bar high
Seein your brain fry
Cuz now it’s coming back every single time you lied
So I’m fuckin the life you had
It’s really not all that bad
If I were you I would have some reason to be so fucking mad
What are you mad at
Nothing to gasp at
Not a difficult fucking question to take a stab at
Lose your composure
The end is getting closer
Soon darling dear it will all be over
Bang. |
Dead End Girl
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Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 10219 | September 23rd, 2006 at 12:29am 1. Cuz isn't really a word o_o
2. The rhyming seems forced
3. Some cursing really is un-needed
But overall it was okay. |
Lor
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Age: 84
Gender: Female
Posts: 476
 | September 23rd, 2006 at 12:31am Sounds a little forced, but it's a good start. |
