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Jackass
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Posts: 1372 | September 23rd, 2006 at 10:54am In my past life
I was an angel.
I was carefree,
and didn't have a doubt.
Im Flying away now
I wanna know who you are
I'm so in love with you,
But you dont know it yet.
Im in flight now
And im still an angel
Not carefree, but shocked to see
That your in love with me.
Im a year older now
and things begin to change.
You no longer love me and i deeply wonder why
But I know your kind of love
Is Different from those whom I have experienced.
Yet you do not need to know
Any of this.
Weather or not I am with you
My Current life is good
Although I am here without you.
I go into flight,
And Never Miss you My Dear.
Angel's Song - By Caitlin Churchill>>>>>Not Me... but a friend of mine.
Now my reply.. in song format. It's much less poetic. But i like it. It sounds like an early green day song.
You say that i dont know you
But I do
You say that I dont love you
But nothing is less true
I've never met you before
But I try
And every time you leave me
A part of me dies
So give me angel wings
and we can be together
You know I'll never forget you
Take me to that place
Where I can be with you
You know I'll never forget you
I know it's hopeless
I think I sound insane
I know I need you
I need to touch your pretty face
You say I'm not trying
But I am
You say you dont miss me
I wish I didnt give a damn
I've never felt this way before
Blue skies at war
Kiss me with your angel's lips
Like I've never been before
So give me angel wings
and we can be together
You know I'll never forget you
Take me to that place
Where all my lies are truths
You know I'll never forget you
I need you
I don't know you
I'm loosing my mind
I need you
Where are you?
I'm loosing my mind |
Addison Montgomery.
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Gender: Female
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  | September 23rd, 2006 at 11:09am It's cool |
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Jackass
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Posts: 1372 | September 24th, 2006 at 01:47pm fuck right off... thats all i get? I thought you'd be happy to hear from me. XD |
WiskersH
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Posts: 60 | September 24th, 2006 at 01:57pm Ha. I like it, anyways. Your song sounds better than Caitlins.  |
Peter Petrelli
King For A Couple Of Days
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Posts: 4161 | September 24th, 2006 at 03:08pm I really liked it. (I'm refering mainly to yours) But I felt that you repeated the word 'angel' far too many times, and it lost its effect. I always love your poetry, because it's simple, but loses none of the charm and emotion.
I especially loved the lines;
'I've never felt this way before
Blue skies at war
Kiss me with your angel's lips
Like I've never been before'. |
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Jackass
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Posts: 1372 | September 24th, 2006 at 06:44pm international_idiot:I really liked it. (I'm refering mainly to yours) But I felt that you repeated the word 'angel' far too many times, and it lost its effect. I always love your poetry, because it's simple, but loses none of the charm and emotion.
I especially loved the lines;
'I've never felt this way before
Blue skies at war
Kiss me with your angel's lips
Like I've never been before'.
4 times in a song? its not that bad..  BUT THANX GUYS |
