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DudeO
King For A Couple Of Days
DudeO
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Mibba
September 27th, 2006 at 05:11pm
This poems a bit depressive, its about abused children who kill their parents, I recently read a book on it and I think that stuff like that is horrible but an idea came up and I had to write about it anyways, we cant just turn a blind eye to whats going on. (I mean hey, look at Devil in a Midnight Mass...)
So read and rate or something.



Ze chorus
redrum redum on my carpet
murder murder they have Shot it
Redrum, redrum, spilling over,
murder murder, quick take cover

They chastised their youth
till they had nothing to say
But who really wins at the end of the day?
We fought them and lost
cause adults always right
so we took out our ShotGuns
and kissed them goodnight

Chorus

The drowned her in lies
till she lost all her thoughts
she did have a point
But hell, she forgot
they told her be quiet
and silent she stayed
as she silently buried them
and watched them decay

These are stories of the children
world has tortured and forgotten
they had something to be scared of
they got tired, they got rid of

chorus


Adding music to it sometime...
Billiexisxsex
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
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September 27th, 2006 at 06:36pm
That is really cool!
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