Dead End Girl
Addict
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 10219 | September 30th, 2006 at 12:28am For Phil.
And thanks to Erin for giving me an idea for the third verse
Of course it's hard letting go of you
But the fall seems so far down
Without these wings I'm getting scared
Like a king without a crown
If we were
I never was
And I never should've been
You only wonder
What your've done
When you're too far in
And it's fading into grey and black
No colors here for me
So leave me with my bloodstained heart
Theres nothing here to see
If we were
I never was
And I never should've been
You only wonder
What your've done
When you're too far in
I took some pictures of myself
But every one was deleted
Not that they weren't beautiful
The person in them was who I hated
If we were
I never was
And I never should've been
You only wonder
What your've done
When you're too far in |
Garrett Hanlund
This Board Is My Home
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 30801
  | September 30th, 2006 at 12:32am It's beautiful. |
°MorbidRose°
Jackass
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 1723
| September 30th, 2006 at 02:28pm I loved it.
But this part:
I took some pictures of myself
But every one was deleted
Not that they weren't beautiful
The person in them was who I hated
I dunno.
Something seems wrong with the second line of this stanza.
It might just be me, though. |
Erin; Technophile
Post Whore
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 22706
| September 30th, 2006 at 05:51pm I love it. And you're welcome =D |
Inari
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 37
Gender: Female
Posts: 2538 | October 1st, 2006 at 08:57am Adore it. |
