The Doctor
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 8786
  | October 2nd, 2006 at 12:27pm Mmkay, new project. I am gonna write a series of poems...that tell a story. Like a poetic version of a concept album. Chaa. This is part 13. Also, in the poem, the italics is Lucifer talking. thanks.
Procrastination- Walking Dictation {xiii}
My pen seems to be
writing wrong.
Has some child demon
corrupted my hand?
The anti-depressants that
alter my mind
induces a vile sickness.
I've lost my free will.
Suicide is such an easy
option, except, I won't betray
my Disséminé.
Yet, stupid girl, remember?
Remember your halo.
It has unravelled and
became your noose.
Have you betrayed her
already? Ignorant
mortal, are you fighting a
battle, that you should not
know of?
No, I shall not listen!
I shall not, I will it not!
You speak like a witch condemned.
Tell me what's on your mind
or do you need some
persuasion?
Stay away from me.
Your touch scars and makes
me rot. No.
Yet you still reply?
I thought you weren't going
to listen?
I'm not.
Oh?
The final excuse
from a self-proclaimed
hypocrite. |
Peter Petrelli
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 4161 | October 2nd, 2006 at 01:46pm I love, but perhaps not so much as the other installments. It's still great, and I love the switch between dialogue, but I just didn't think it was as fantastic as previous parts. Sorry  |
Inari
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 37
Gender: Female
Posts: 2538 | October 2nd, 2006 at 02:12pm I liked this. A true conflict between beauty and an easy option. |
Insurgentes
Post Whore
Age: 37
Gender: Female
Posts: 23688
| October 2nd, 2006 at 06:46pm It was a little confusing, but still wonderful. As always. |
°MorbidRose°
Jackass
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 1723
| October 2nd, 2006 at 07:18pm I really like it.
Especially this line
Yet, stupid girl, remember?
Remember your halo.
It has unravelled and
became your noose. |
The Doctor
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 8786
| October 3rd, 2006 at 12:06pm Psshh. You should just say what I think.
It sucked. |
Insurgentes
Post Whore
Age: 37
Gender: Female
Posts: 23688
| October 3rd, 2006 at 12:12pm Sylvia Plath Wannabee:Psshh. You should just say what I think.
It sucked. No it doesn't, you're quite talented. |
tom_in_a_box
Geek
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 316 | October 3rd, 2006 at 02:46pm i like it |
