charm

ok so this poem is a bit forced and not to great
and at times i switch from the words "you" to "me" if that makes sense
i do this because basically this poem is of a girl looking in the mirror
and regreting last night but shes calling the girl in the mirror a fool but she kinda realises its her yer confussing but please read


the thoughts you have when you first wake up
the first sight of sunshine
through your curtains
the smell of last nights beer
still lingers in the air
and your clothes still lay
upon the bedroom floor

you turn over to see hes not there
and its all just been a lie
his sweet words and his charm
as he layed between your sheets
he didnt even have the guts to say goodbye
but the slam of the door
tells you that hes already gone

you wernt anything special
but as you got down on your knees
sweet promises and lies
that escaped from his mouth
you believed every word
what a fool you were

as his body touched yours
and your mouths were locked
did you honestly think this was love
were you to blind to see
that he was using me

why did you let him take you home
why did you let him take of your clothes
was it the way he held your hand
and the way he used his charm
as you got down on your knees
did you not see that this was
all going to be a mistake
couldnt you see you were
already falling apart right in his arms



this sucks i dont know why im posting it but yer

I liked it.

It doesn't suck! >: D

thanks