secret

ok so i basically just wrote this now
and its true about something thats happen today and tomorow
ok il explain there was a guy that liked my best friend
she liked him back but her parents wont let her go out with him
she then said to me its ok cause she doesnt like him that way
he stoped likeing her ....and began to like me
i now like him and were kinda together .
so i feel like iv stolen my best mates guy in a way
and me and him arnt sure how to tell her that me and him are seeing each other xx ok so coment please it would mean alot to me

with one phone call
i could tear you apart
with every word that i say
but lets just give it over with
i begin to speak
and the line becomes silent
have i said something wrong ?
"why did i even begin"

my fingers start to twich
as my breath begins to get heavier
and i start to stutter
its hard to find the right words to say
so ill put it off for another day

i dont want to see you cry tonight
lets leave it untill the morning
lets watch the sun rise
il hold your hand and hope to god
that youl find it in yourself to forgive

i dont want to throw away everything
we all make mistakes at times
but he`s not one of mine
hes the reason that i smile
because of him the blood upon my arms
has now dried
and my scars have began to fade
ever since he met me

and i close my eyes
and try to block you out
its not nice to say
but your taking my happiness away
with the guilt that runs through my mind
i took him from you and made him mine

when the clouds come over
i know theres apoligies il have to make
theres feelings im going to have to hide
theres all these thoughts running through my mind
what if i open my mouth to speak
but the words dont come out
what if you turn away
because you already know what
im going to say


if only you knew the secrets
that i hide
if only i had the guts
to speak whats on my mind
so this is it were in it together
hold my hand im getting nervous

i wish id told you from the start
then this moment wouldnt be so hard
my toes are twitching
and i cant concentrate
the nerves are building up
maybe this would have been best
kept as a secret?

I really really really like it

Good Job

I loved it, as usual, Sophie.

You really are great at writing, and though all your poems are long, I stay interested with every line.
I loved this stanza:

i dont want to see you cry tonight
lets leave it untill the morning
lets watch the sun rise
il hold your hand and hope to god
that youl find it in yourself to forgive

yay aww thank you
the whole meaning of the poem was about my friend and how i had to tell her about me and the guy .......and well today i told her and things didnt go too well she aint talking to me now and i cant help but feel mean for the fact i dont feel too bad shes hurting because im so happy with this guy ..yer i know im a cow argh
but thanks

:O You're called Sophie? So am i.
But anyways, it's very good, like it. I've felt like that before.. it's a suckish feeling.

thank you gah
yer real suckage feeling
...and im stupid iv lost my best friend
over a guy