Garrett Hanlund
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  | October 9th, 2006 at 01:32am The final conversation plays
on a loop over and over in my head.
It echos so loud, I swear others can hear it.
Though they say they cannot tell,
I'm sure my pain drones in my every day conversation.
The monotone ramblings of a lost soul.
We used to be so happy. Carefree and childish.
Making up words to speak our minds,
to not sound so serious. Though we meant it.
At least I did. With everything I had.
It may not sound like much,
the every day chiché... To them. Not to us.
Yes, I remember it like it was yesterday.
Sometimes I wish it were only yesterday.
But I don't want to relive that night.
You once told me nothing is impossible.
I laughed and agreed, though I didn't believe.
Because I used to think nothing was real.
We were mere pawns set on this track.
For why, I never knew. But I preached it well.
Metaphors and big words made it seem true.
It all came at me so fast.
I didn't even notice you were fading.
I knew all about it, though, I'm not sure
if I didn't notice at all, or if I just didn't want it to happen.
How childish. Like hiding in a toybox because
I didn't want to stop playing.
I pretended like it wasn't possible,
because I didnt want you to go.
That night.
I wish I could say I remember it well,
but that would be a lie. It was such a blur.
I knew by the hollow tone of his letters what had happened.
I knew, because it was not you who greeted me.
And it hurt so much, because I was the last to know.
But we proved something others claimed impossible.
Not only did we prove it was real,
but we proved forever is more than a word.
Love, is more than a feeling.
Life, is more than just to live. |
Cidlet
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| October 9th, 2006 at 01:42am *claps*
Very well written my dear, I especially liked:
How childish. Like hiding in a toybox because
I didn't want to stop playing.
You're awsome Hannah, never stop writing. |
Garrett Hanlund
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| October 10th, 2006 at 10:02pm Thank you Cidlet, dear. |
The Rev
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Posts: 14004 | October 10th, 2006 at 10:08pm i guess i got my wish, and i got to read another poem by you 
and this one is also very Amazing.
you had my eyes glued to my screen from start to finish. |
Garrett Hanlund
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| October 10th, 2006 at 10:40pm Shut Up Juice!:i guess i got my wish, and i got to read another poem by you
and this one is also very Amazing.
you had my eyes glued to my screen from start to finish.
Aleckz Ily.  |
The Rev
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Posts: 14004 | October 10th, 2006 at 10:46pm ILYToo |
Dehren McGhengland
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Posts: 49206 | October 10th, 2006 at 10:49pm Euuuuh, it's amazing Hannah.
You're osm at like, everything.
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