Tsunami poem

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[~Whats.Hurr.Name~]
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[~Whats.Hurr.Name~]
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October 15th, 2006 at 03:38am
I woke one morning
To find that my feet
Were half underground
And half on the street

From buildings afar
Not known to be seen
A creature so cruel
A creature so mean

Had taken away my beautiful home
Where I was free to wander and roam
I sat in the rubble, I sat in the sands
Of this creatures unbearable hands

Until at last I was found
And wrapped in a towel, safe and sound
Finally I drift to sleep
Never to awake, never to peep
At what the Tsunami had done to my home
Where I’ll never be free to wander and roam


Er i won some local competition with this not long after the Tsunami, er please comment.
Sara.
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October 15th, 2006 at 03:50am
Forced and sounds like it's for Poetry 1.

.... Sorry.
Peter Petrelli
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October 15th, 2006 at 07:24am
I agree.
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