Martian Girl Banned
 Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 33037
| October 12th, 2006 at 10:09pm This is my first poem in almost six years.
Another place and time,
these remnants of ages past
would have been ingratiating
instead of the malevolent manifesto
it truly was.
Watch the diminishing light
illuminate the shattered picture frames
displaying our past selves
long forgotten.
Take a look around.
Everything has fallen down. |
Dead End Girl Addict
 Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 10219 | October 12th, 2006 at 11:28pm I liked it  |
Arcane-Inamorata King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 3278
| October 12th, 2006 at 11:30pm pretty |
The Rev Addict
 Age: 38 Gender: Male Posts: 14004 | October 13th, 2006 at 10:07am If all your poems were like that 6 years ago, i dont see why you gave it up.
Its simply wonderful.
"illuminate the shattered picture frames
displaying our past selves "
thats my favorite part |
Inari King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538 | October 13th, 2006 at 11:35am Wow. That was beautiful. |
Martian Girl Banned
 Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 33037
| October 15th, 2006 at 05:43pm Thanks everyone.  |