Déjà Vu

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Martian Girl
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Martian Girl
Age: 37
Gender: Female
Posts: 33037

Mibba
October 12th, 2006 at 10:09pm
This is my first poem in almost six years. Dno



Another place and time,
these remnants of ages past
would have been ingratiating
instead of the malevolent manifesto
it truly was.

Watch the diminishing light
illuminate the shattered picture frames
displaying our past selves
long forgotten.

Take a look around.
Everything has fallen down.
Dead End Girl
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Dead End Girl
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 10219
October 12th, 2006 at 11:28pm
I liked it Cool
Arcane-Inamorata
King For A Couple Of Days
Arcane-Inamorata
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 3278

Mibba
October 12th, 2006 at 11:30pm
pretty
The Rev
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The Rev
Age: 38
Gender: Male
Posts: 14004
October 13th, 2006 at 10:07am
If all your poems were like that 6 years ago, i dont see why you gave it up.
Its simply wonderful.

"illuminate the shattered picture frames
displaying our past selves "
thats my favorite part
Inari
King For A Couple Of Days
Inari
Age: 37
Gender: Female
Posts: 2538
October 13th, 2006 at 11:35am
Wow. That was beautiful.
Martian Girl
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Martian Girl
Age: 37
Gender: Female
Posts: 33037

Mibba
October 15th, 2006 at 05:43pm
Thanks everyone. Very Happy
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