*gd_punk* Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 28 | October 20th, 2006 at 04:48pm I'm not finished yet, but i'll post the rest later!
She's watching her Prey,
Walking down whisper way.
She stalks an old lover,
just because she suffers,
and the pain won't wash away.
She's kills because she's in pain,
she's in pain because she is heartbroken.
She is heartbroken because her lovers,
always called her insane. |
Rape Me Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 25
 | October 20th, 2006 at 09:11pm kewl |
tomamazon GSBitch
 Age: 29 Gender: Female Posts: 68084
 | October 21st, 2006 at 01:30pm Short.
Not overly impressed. |
JOOLS Addict
 Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 11676
 | October 21st, 2006 at 07:50pm Meh.
The last phrase isn't the best, but I'm anxious to hear the rest.
Although, as far as stories go, this would be a good one  |
[Broken Pretty] Idiot
![[Broken Pretty]](/data/board-avatars/empty.gif) Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 572 | October 22nd, 2006 at 11:07pm its sounds alright so far. |