[Broken Pretty] Idiot
![[Broken Pretty]](/data/board-avatars/empty.gif) Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 572 | October 22nd, 2006 at 11:01pm i wrote this for my friend... hopefully explaining a few things to him. can you guess? joke. like it??
Wishes.
i wish i didnt talk.
i wish i didnt see.
all for you.
the pain does not decrease when the smiles on our face.
smirks and giggle, alike,
i know this will be alright.
some how
some day
ill smile and you will too
whether apart or together
i wish this friendship does not die.
will these wishes stop what is needed?
will they destroy me inside and out?
you know what i mean.
too many words have left my lips telling you the truth
i couldnt not tell any one else.
forever and eternally i am thankful for what we are
let's hold hands in spirit and kill this night away. |
threeam. Geek
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 350 | October 23rd, 2006 at 09:57pm forever and eternally i am thankful for what we are
let's hold hands in spirit and kill this night away.
that's beautiful. :] |
I Am So Beautiful! FUCK! Jackass
 Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 1019
| October 25th, 2006 at 08:05pm Awesome. I like how you worded it. Good job! ^_^
It didn't really rhyme and that's cool. A lot of poems do. But I don't think it would've been as great if it was a rhymy poem.
^_^ |