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r e v e n g e
Geek
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 234 | October 21st, 2006 at 08:08pm I’m Filthy…sorry
Calling the caring
and stupid…
I’d like to welcome you all
To my humble home
Where the corpses of my hopes and dreams
Lie around stagnant and rotting
So mind your step
And hold your breath
I’m sorry, I would have cleaned up
But you see,
I was simply to lazy
There’s no preface here
It’s all me
And it’s as filthy as hell
Why do you stare, so scared
I thought this was what you wanted?
You wanted to see me
The real me you said
You said it and asked
To see what no one else had seen
For your own morbid fantasy
But you look like you want to take it back
And now you’re running away
Didn’t you see the sign?
No one
Is getting out of here Alive.
.....what do you think?
comments? |
Teenage Graffiti
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 46 | October 21st, 2006 at 09:37pm i can't read that at all with the dark red font... |
r e v e n g e
Geek
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 234 | October 21st, 2006 at 09:50pm why not, are you color blind? :s |
Jesse Lacey
Post Whore
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 23946
  | October 21st, 2006 at 09:52pm I LOVE it.
Amazing much? |
swoon-
Post Whore
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 1 000 000
| October 21st, 2006 at 10:01pm eMofo:why not, are you color blind? :s
If he/she was colour blind how could they know it was dark red?
And the poem's good! |
[Broken Pretty]
Idiot
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 572 | October 22nd, 2006 at 11:04pm yay.
i like it. |
r e v e n g e
Geek
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 234 | October 24th, 2006 at 03:30am thanks everyone 
I still dont see how dark red is hard to read. |
Riot on the Radio
Jackass
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 1841
| October 24th, 2006 at 03:36am Cool |
tomamazon
GSBitch
Age: 29
Gender: Female
Posts: 68084
| October 24th, 2006 at 09:11am Amazing. |
Kristmas_Tsanne
Great Success!
Age: 32
Gender: Male
Posts: 59161
| October 24th, 2006 at 09:24am Ah, i really like it  |
Roshie
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 9 | October 25th, 2006 at 06:56pm That was awesome.
I love it. [: |
Deadboy
Geek
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 288
| October 25th, 2006 at 07:12pm rad  |
r e v e n g e
Geek
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 234 | October 26th, 2006 at 02:25am thanks so much everyone |
Matty.
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 34
Gender: Male
Posts: 3945 | October 26th, 2006 at 02:38am Thats heaps cool, its inspired me to write one now |
Milk
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 3741
| October 26th, 2006 at 05:59am What was inspirational. Good Job |
