girl almighty
GSBitch
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 76615 | October 27th, 2006 at 10:30am I generally don't write poetry. I don't usually find it helps me to think straight, but when I picked up my pad a few minutes ago I couldn't make what I felt into sentences, so I just wrote it all down very quickly as a kind of poem. It's not great, but it was exactly what was in my head when I put pen to paper.
Grip, twist
Bleed.
Empty silence is desolation;
Crowded silence is deafening
Social fences are oil and water
Washed up marks
Tiny pebble, enclosed drop
Storming
Tide
Drop in the ocean;
Point in the abyss
Elevated freedom yet sinking weight
Depth. Boil.
Stop.
Twist and rip
Suppressed rage
Burst. Pop. Smash.
Please. |
JOOLS
Addict
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 11676
  | October 27th, 2006 at 08:31pm Brilliant. I love this. It's a perfect example of what agression is really like.
-Julie |
Peter Petrelli
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 4161 | October 28th, 2006 at 06:45am I love. I especially loved 'Social fences are oil and water
Washed up marks'
 Awesome. |
tomamazon
GSBitch
Age: 29
Gender: Female
Posts: 68084
| October 28th, 2006 at 02:42pm Oh my god Jo.
That's amazing. To say you don't write poetry, that is just beautiful.
10.
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paper shoes
This Board Is My Home
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 34269 | October 28th, 2006 at 02:46pm Reminds me of my friend Katrina's writing style.
Gewd. :] |
LoGo
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 58
| October 28th, 2006 at 02:55pm cool tis good |
