Sorry's Not Good Enough

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Milk King For A Couple Of Days Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 3741	October 27th, 2006 at 03:05pm Poem I wrote last night... Yadda yadda yadda... you get the point Sorry's Not Good Enough What do you apologize for? Repetetive and lame, you are such a bore Why apologize if you do it again? Sorry's not good enough, my friend Your web of lies, so intricately written It's such a shame you must be smitten Unable to understand who you truly are The spawn of Satan, undoubtably, by far Decieving and snake-like, a path you trace Followed alone, by yourself you race Amongst the unknown, your dignity lies Doing anything for the shreiking cries The stress you put me through, it wasn't enough To prove to your mind, that you were tough You always guessed, not to realize This game of yours, was your demise Leave me alone with our unborn child Your one-person dance, you made me wild Why apologize now, it's the end Sorry's not good enough, my friend
Milk King For A Couple Of Days Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 3741	October 28th, 2006 at 12:57am Okay... so who likes it?
Dead End Girl Addict Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 10219	October 28th, 2006 at 01:03am The rhymes kind of seem...strange. It's just the same AABB. Perhaps try a different scheme?
Milk King For A Couple Of Days Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 3741	October 29th, 2006 at 01:02pm Dead End Girl: The rhymes kind of seem...strange. It's just the same AABB. Perhaps try a different scheme? Thats a good idea, my rhymes ren't very good without a thesaurus, though.

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