Nowhere Is Now Here

I basically wrote this about the completely shit visit I had with my sister this weekend. I'd appreciate some opinions!

Dim flashing lights and skipping music
It's enough to make you crazy here
2am and your champagne tears flow free
And drop into the glass that holds my fears

I find it strange to see you here
But not much has changed between us
You're still naive; I still hate everything
So we don't have anything to discuss

3am and everything's according to plan
You're screaming at me just for fun
And you never did learn to apoligize
Letting you rage sink with the rising sun

(chorus)
'Cause no where is now here
And now it is so clear
That you are the one who never took any blame
And no where is now here
I've shed all of my fears
Don't think about leaving 'til you've suffered the same

You've suffered the same(x3)

I sit here alone now just for a minute
Think of all I deserve to tell you
But then you show up and I lose my nerve
And I'll throw out my opinion too

You always did like the fancy things
Like the decorations could change your name
4am and the diamonds don't look so real
So why do I still feel your pain?

The conclusion remains as it always was
So there's not point in staying undercover
5am and I remember why I hate you
You and I just can't deal with each other

(chorus)

more of a song than a poem dont ya think? it pretty kwl

yeah it is a song...that's why there's a chorus. Thanks anyway though!