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Sylar
Falling In Love With The Board
Sylar
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October 29th, 2006 at 09:27pm
Alright, hopefully this thread is justified, if not, well it's no use me saying 'delete it' because the mods will anyway.
ON WITH THE POST:
Those of you who I've pm'd will know that after about 6 months of writers block, work, hangovers and fights- I've actually finished the story off.
I've tied up all the loose ends I can think of, everything's sorted out and blah blah blah.
I'm thinking of doing a one shot sequel later on and basically I want this thread to be for you guys to tell me where I went wrong in the story, how I could improve my writing etc. It's also for you all to tell me what a brilliant writer I am (compliments to me are always gratefully accepted Laughing )
So thank you in advance to those of you who read and rate it (and again thanks to you all who've already rated it).
Banach95
King For A Couple Of Days
Banach95
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Mibba Blog
October 29th, 2006 at 11:11pm
Hi... How about a link and some info ON the story Wink
Sylar
Falling In Love With The Board
Sylar
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Gender: Female
Posts: 5703
October 29th, 2006 at 11:31pm
http://www.geekstinkbreath.net/fan/story/1797/0/

It's a pretty angsty story, Billie kills Adie, Mike's not helping by aggravating Billie, Tre's stuck in the middle plus Joey and Jakob are torn between their dad and their mother's memory.
Banach95
King For A Couple Of Days
Banach95
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Mibba Blog
October 29th, 2006 at 11:51pm
sounds interesting Smile

Thanks
Madeluxx
King For A Couple Of Days
Madeluxx
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Mibba
October 30th, 2006 at 07:00am
It's brilliant, deffinately one of my favourite stories on GSB, the first part had me hooked within the first sentence!

It's different to the other stories I've read on GSB that are predictable.

I hope you do end up writing a sequel it would be awesome.
Sylar
Falling In Love With The Board
Sylar
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 5703
October 31st, 2006 at 03:34am
Thank you! -grins like a fool-
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