Parades Are Riots

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Santa Billie Falling In Love With The Board Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 8285	November 3rd, 2006 at 11:46pm Parades are riots Dances in war Gunning down lives They care no more A heart explodes A brave man dies It drowns the sound Of a poor man's cries Silence is always A government's dream A quiet acceptance Is what it may seem The blood is drained The needles are dried We pay for stupidity And they're not tried
Miss_Minority039 Geek Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 332	November 3rd, 2006 at 11:56pm i likey tis good 10
The Kill Falling In Love With The Board Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 8449	November 3rd, 2006 at 11:58pm Wow... This was really... I'm not even sure what word to use. It was really... effective =] I love it.
Gerard Way. Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 50	November 3rd, 2006 at 11:59pm i love it!!! i changed my name...like me new name? its my fave. ozzy song...
Santa Billie Falling In Love With The Board Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 8285	November 4th, 2006 at 12:02am Goodbye To Romance: i love it!!! i changed my name...like me new name? its my fave. ozzy song... Yes. Thanks guys I wrote it in History class in like five minutes I wanna make it [the poem] into a song.
Peter Petrelli King For A Couple Of Days Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 4161	November 4th, 2006 at 09:55am I really liked it. Didn't sound too forced... but I'd change something in the second verse. I'm not sure, but maybe using a different word than 'man' twice would work. I'm not really sure what you could do to make it better. I especially liked the first stanza and the 'parades are riots' imagery.
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921	November 4th, 2006 at 11:55am Last stanza was a nice ending. I really liked it.
just_call_me_dookie Addict Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 12902	November 5th, 2006 at 03:00pm I like it. it's good. plez answer my pm.

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