could have been 'swell'

i havent been 'well' for a little while now.
i dont blame anyone but myself
i pressure myself to do the things i do.
i fight for what i believe even if it kills me.

i didnt want of this to happen.
it was the only way i knew how to 'fix' it all
without destroying myself totally
so many occurances played out in my mind
screaming only does so much.

i should have known.
it had happened before
why didnt i stop it then?
feeling the 'vibes' in my gut
nothing to do but sit and wait

i know you both know it
im holding on
the end of the year isnt the end
i know it isnt.
not long now to prove it that it wasnt useless

stupid and hopeless.
why only those words i use?
there's got to be something better than all of this.
immigrants to my mind do not stop at the gates
go to the gates and back
punish the sins in my mind.

nothing couldbe as better as it was
but to change the past means the future was never there,
i wont say goodbye to both.

cool poem!

It’s more like a diary entry than a poem (which, in most cases, isn’t a good thing).

What you should and shouldn't do
1.Capital letters at the beginning of every sentence.
2.Don’t write exactly what you mean. Be vague, only refer to things and so on (but don’t loose the message.) Or you can always use metaphors.
3.Do not use the quotation marks like this: ‘well’, ‘fix’ etc.
4.Full stops at the end of all sentences. (You can use the end of a row as a full stop if you like but don’t mix).
5.Create flow. (To do that you would have to use full stops and commas. You also need to keep and eye on the length of every row, and sometimes you even have to count syllables.)
6.Proofread your poem before posting it. (Fix things such as spelling and grammar mistakes)



Haven't been 'well' for a little while now.
I dont blame anyone but myself.
I pressure myself to do the things i do.
I fight for what I believe even if it kills me.

I didn't want of this to happen.
It was the only way I knew how to 'fix' it all
without destroying myself totally.
So many occurrences played out in my mind.
Screaming only does so much.

I should have known.
It had happened before.
Why didn't I stop it then?
Feeling the 'vibes' in my gut.
Nothing to do but sit and wait.

I know you both know it.
I'm holding on.
The end of the year isn't the end.
I know it isn't.
Not long now to prove it that it wasn't useless.

Stupid and hopeless.
Why only those words I use?
There's got to be something better than all of this.
Immigrants to my mind do not stop at the gates.
Go to the gates and back,
punish the sins in my mind.

Nothing could be as better as it was
but to change the past means the future was never there,
I won't say goodbye to both.

^That’s your job. But I’m so nice that I did it for you this time
One or two mistakes are ok. That many can only lower the standard on a poem.


That’s all for now. Keep writing. Good luck and have fun.