What Life Could Be Like....

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BOLD_BAD_AND_SLUTTY
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
BOLD_BAD_AND_SLUTTY
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Posts: 27
November 11th, 2006 at 07:47pm
Gosh. People should read my story. Tell me if there are any problems I should know about please. Also, does anybody know when we can add new pages. Becaus I sure cant. Very Happy
Banach95
King For A Couple Of Days
Banach95
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Gender: Female
Posts: 4870

Mibba Blog
November 12th, 2006 at 03:28am
Hi... How about a link to your story and a little blurb about it.

BTW I changed the thread title to your story title and removed the poll Wink
Banach95
King For A Couple Of Days
Banach95
Age: 47
Gender: Female
Posts: 4870

Mibba Blog
November 12th, 2006 at 03:50am
666_Satans_Angel_666:
Tell me if there are any problems I should know about please. Very Happy



Okay as an editor this story needs some correcting. It was approved long before I started here.

You need to hit the enter key as to avoid 'run-on' paragraphs Wink Please refer to the examples Smile


EX: Emily, Alannah and Maddy sat around watching TV."I'm bored," said Alannah. "Good for you," replied Maddy. Suddenly someone knocked on the door. "Thetas probably the guys," said Emily getting up to let them in. "S'up ladies," said Tre sitting down in Emily's seat. "Excuse me," said Emily in a tone of voice that said what the hells your problem. "Yeah," said Tre playing dum "That's my seat," "So?". Emily just rolled her eyes and sat down next to Alannah.


CORRECTED EX: Emily, Alannah and Maddy sat around watching TV. "I'm bored," said Alannah.
"Good for you," replied Maddy.
Suddenly someone knocked on the door. "That's probably the guys," said Emily getting up to let them in.
"S'up ladies," said Tre sitting down in Emily's seat.
"Excuse me," said Emily in a tone of voice that said what the hells your problem.
"Yeah," said Tre playing dum "That's my seat,"
"So?". Emily just rolled her eyes and sat down next to Alannah.
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