What Life Could Be Like....

Gosh. People should read my story. Tell me if there are any problems I should know about please. Also, does anybody know when we can add new pages. Becaus I sure cant.

Hi... How about a link to your story and a little blurb about it.

BTW I changed the thread title to your story title and removed the poll

666_Satans_Angel_666:

Tell me if there are any problems I should know about please.

Okay as an editor this story needs some correcting. It was approved long before I started here.

You need to hit the enter key as to avoid 'run-on' paragraphs Please refer to the examples


EX: Emily, Alannah and Maddy sat around watching TV."I'm bored," said Alannah. "Good for you," replied Maddy. Suddenly someone knocked on the door. "Thetas probably the guys," said Emily getting up to let them in. "S'up ladies," said Tre sitting down in Emily's seat. "Excuse me," said Emily in a tone of voice that said what the hells your problem. "Yeah," said Tre playing dum "That's my seat," "So?". Emily just rolled her eyes and sat down next to Alannah.


CORRECTED EX: Emily, Alannah and Maddy sat around watching TV. "I'm bored," said Alannah.
"Good for you," replied Maddy.
Suddenly someone knocked on the door. "That's probably the guys," said Emily getting up to let them in.
"S'up ladies," said Tre sitting down in Emily's seat.
"Excuse me," said Emily in a tone of voice that said what the hells your problem.
"Yeah," said Tre playing dum "That's my seat,"
"So?". Emily just rolled her eyes and sat down next to Alannah.