Paper Umbrella Parade
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| FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days  Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921  |  Dedicated to a certain girl who slapped me in the face because I wouldn't kiss her. Bitch.  Paper Umbrella Parade Your spit in my eye. Chew with your mouth Closed. Mastication of the meager minded, You Parade under a paper umbrella, while We both are drenched, but I Digress into a dichotomy of only Hate and the Same. Paroxysms rarely lead to peace. Epilepsy in excess, the Seizures, Fits, never suited you at all. – An objet trouvé that Should have stayed forgotten. Discarded, just like your sanity Departed. |
| What's in a name? King For A Couple Of Days  Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 2451 | Listen to that sound! It’s applauds and cheers from me ^^ First of all I love the title “Paper Umbrella Parade”. Don’t ask me why, I have no answer. I like a lot of things about the poem. I loved the structure, and the flow it created, to bits. I also love how you made the wording complex but the poem itself rather simple. And I like the way you highlighted some words, I thought it was rather well thought out. Really good job, dear soul mate.  |
| Peter Petrelli King For A Couple Of Days  Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 4161 | |
| Inari King For A Couple Of Days  Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538 | |
| FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921 | Wow, you guys, you have no idea how much your comments mean to me. I was incredibly afraid just to scroll down the page to read them, and then they were so positive. I could almost cry right now I'm so happy. Annnd I believe you guys have created that little bit of confidence boost I needed to bring this to my school's writing club. I was afraid to bring anything before. Thank you again!  |
| What's in a name? King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 2451 | No problem, dear. We're just being honest you know  |
| Misanthropist Post Whore  Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 23279 | |
| FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921 | Thank youuuu.  |
| JOOLS Addict  Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 11676  | |
| snowcherry King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 3912 | I looove the title.  But I love the poem, too, it's awsome. |
| rollerpig GSBitch  Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 62283 | That's so amazing  |
| FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921 | You guys are so awesome.  |
| love. King For A Couple Of Days  Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 2844 |
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