gasp. Geek
 Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 316
| November 21st, 2006 at 08:03pm well im not very good at this stuff but i gave it a try and tried to write something. Its dedicated to billie joe to say thankyou for all the hard times he has got me through
Through out your words you have changed the lives
of many people of many different ages.
Even though you are often misunderstood by the ones who don’t know you.
Yet your beauty will always shine through.
Thank you for all the advice to be who I real am
and not be something im not.
Even though I haven’t met you.
You are a hero for me.
Thank you. |
*Pyrotechnics_Anonymous* Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
 Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 89
| November 22nd, 2006 at 07:50pm awww. that was sweet. It wasn't poem, but still. |
Gerard Way. Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
 Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 50 | November 22nd, 2006 at 07:52pm i like it! very truthful |
the resistance. King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 4898
| November 22nd, 2006 at 08:08pm Aww, cute. |
new.slang Idiot
 Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 764 | November 22nd, 2006 at 08:10pm Awww.  I think it's very sweet. |
Jesse Lacey Post Whore
 Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 23946
 | November 22nd, 2006 at 08:22pm It's sweet.
Is it intended to be a poem?
If so, put it in stanzas, spell check, and use punctuation.
I like it.. |
The Hippy Geek
 Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 112
 | November 22nd, 2006 at 08:26pm Sweet  |
Ilse Falling In Love With The Board
 Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 8465 | November 22nd, 2006 at 08:31pm It wasn't a poem, it was a note.
Please, don't call it a poem.
I'm not going to sugar coat anything for anyone.
And before anyone gets on my case for being harsh, this person posted their poem of their own free will, it's fair game. |