Wunny Bacon?!?
Jackass
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 1644
 | November 23rd, 2006 at 11:41am Tighten up the laces,
Pay no attention to my shrieks.
We are more than faces,
In a land of eight-day weeks.
Our dreams are turned to ashes,
Our hopes go off to fight in battles.
The system loves its matches,
And takes away our saddles.
Our war against the trends,
Strengthen our ally in fashion.
Couture soldiers still stand,
Against the CRACK! to cause welts on our passion.
Brocade bothers brothers,
And silk sickens sisters,
While fathers and mothers
Share their concerned whispers.
I'm actually diong this for an assignment, but I really liked this one. If you have any comments, please post them. Tell me if I have anything I could work on, please. |
star-gazer93
Geek
Age: 31
Gender: Male
Posts: 122 | November 23rd, 2006 at 07:33pm cool poem. |
