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spill_no_sick
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 31
Gender: -
Posts: 8588 | November 27th, 2006 at 05:24pm Words from a Highschooler
On the eve of yester’s marrow
My companion fell to the sky (surrendering his soul?)
His tears fell upon my own
Washing them down beyond my resolution.
Words from a Three-Year-Old
Yesterday,
My friend died.
I was sad,
And so I cried. |
ha_ha_you're_screwed
Geek
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 151
  | November 27th, 2006 at 05:33pm What's in a name?:You two didn’t read the Rules I presume. Do that and edit or delete your posts. (Or I will do it for you ) |
JOOLS
Addict
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 11676
| November 27th, 2006 at 05:36pm What's in a name?:You two didn’t read the Rules I presume. Do that and edit or delete your posts. (Or I will do it for you ) |
What's in a name?
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 2451
| November 27th, 2006 at 05:44pm You two didn’t read the Rules I presume. Do that and edit or delete your posts. (Or I will do it for you  )
Edit: next time I'll just delet your posts if you don't give any feedback. |
spill_no_sick
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 31
Gender: -
Posts: 8588 | November 27th, 2006 at 05:48pm which rule did I violate?
edit: I can't quote you and it looked sloppy
edit: I was actually reading the rules as I posted this (I clicked on "Post New Subject" in a locked poem) so I was quite aware of them at the time |
What's in a name?
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 2451
| November 27th, 2006 at 05:49pm Not you. The ones who replied. I’m sorry if I confused you. |
spill_no_sick
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 31
Gender: -
Posts: 8588 | November 27th, 2006 at 05:52pm ah, thank you for that (damn, these rules are strict...compared to when I used to come on here often |
What's in a name?
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 2451
| November 27th, 2006 at 05:54pm Yeah, I know, but there need to be some kind of guidelines for people to follow to make this section work better. |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 2921
| November 27th, 2006 at 06:13pm I absolutely love the contrast between the two trains of thought. Not to mention the wording from the highschooler's point of view is absolutely beautiful. |
Peter Petrelli
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 4161 | November 28th, 2006 at 02:14pm It's gorgeous. Simple, yet awesome. I agree with Panda - I loved the contrast dearly. |
new.slang
Idiot
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 764 | November 28th, 2006 at 06:37pm I love it. The highschooler's wording is spectacular. "Fell to the sky" is such a lovely line and a great way of putting it. The three year old is so honest and gets the same point across as the highschooler (Captian Obivous here).  |
Misanthropist
Post Whore
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 23279 | November 28th, 2006 at 06:58pm I really liked the concept and format behind your poem. The high schooler's bit, obviously, was my favorite. The line My companion fell to the sky (surrendering his soul?) I thought was especially good. |
rollerpig
GSBitch
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 62283 | November 29th, 2006 at 08:27am That's awesome! :]
[I think it's awesome how you took both views of one point] |
spill_no_sick
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 31
Gender: -
Posts: 8588 | November 29th, 2006 at 03:20pm it's weird
I wrote more in one day than the entire year....and the shortest poem, with the simplest concept, gets the best response
I feel like Kevin Smith watching the audience's response from CLERKS "out of all of those lines of dialogue the favorite scene is when we're dancing like idiots?"
but thank you guys a lot, I'm glad that i didn't peak last year |
