do you remember?

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mybassgoesdirntdirntdirnt
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mybassgoesdirntdirntdirnt
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Mibba
December 8th, 2006 at 08:35pm
Do you remember?


do you remember when we were young?
we were two best friends, two peas in a pod
there was never a doubt that i was here for you
i was always your support, your wall to lean on too

it happened soo fast i didn't see it at first
you met a boy, a boy with a curse
you said "when i'm sad he makes me happy
when i'm scared, he makes me calm

When i get lonely at night
he makes everything allright
he's my shoulder for leaning
i love him, he compleates me"

well my dear friend, its all obvious now
why you would ignore, why you would clown
about him and only him no i wasn't there
i didn't exsit, i was just a canves thats bare.

upon me you would draw and write his name
yes, that was one of your favorite games
and i would just stand as empty as i seem
but your eyes were blinded, no you couldn't see

how broken i was, how all my years
were replaced by everything i had feared
After you hit bottom, as low as you did
there was always me, and i'd never kid

i was your angel, your saviour in white
when i was there, you were alright
as the months and the days seemed to passed
i knew our time wasn't going to last

its been too long scince i last told you
how i felt, how you were a fool
in fear of your rejection, of your choice
for too long i felt that i had no voice

in your game of love, your game of trust
where you left everyone else in the dust
everyone you knew, everyone who cared
do you know what its like to feel this scared?

i'm sorry, but this is something i have to do
its obvious there isn't enough room for two
you feel this is hard for you?
well think about it, times it by two

thats how i felt, every minute of everyday
when i was with you, when i was away
So in conclusion, to sum it all up
thank you for ignoring me and stealing my love

thank you for making me feel betrayed
thank you for making me feel this way
thank you for everything you have done
i want you to know that you've finally won

you've got everything you want, i'm not needed
now stop your crying, stop being so concidied
for you have him, you have your one
and i am nobody, i have none

But when he breaks your heart, like i know he will
again there you'll be, sitting upon your window sill
looking out at the sky, seeing that i was right
seeing it all from my eyes, from my site

And i hope you cry, and i hope you hurt
i want you to realize why i had to write this verse
and why i couldn't spill it all to your ears
Becasue this feeling is something called fear

But inspite of everything that will happen
i'll be there again, just like i had been
becasue i'm better than you, i'm dependable
i don't think like you, no your not exspendable

But who knows how long this will take
for we cannot predic our fates
for the time being i'll lay here in pain
and i will definitly feel no shame

do you remember?
DudeO
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DudeO
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Mibba
December 9th, 2006 at 06:18pm
Wow. That was very full of meaning. I liked it, the rhymes were kinda iffy but other then that I really liked it.

bravo
mybassgoesdirntdirntdirnt
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mybassgoesdirntdirntdirnt
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Mibba
December 11th, 2006 at 10:56pm
thank you =]

yea, i might change some of the rhyming, i'm not sure though :/
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