Is it love?

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luv-you-billie-joe<3
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
luv-you-billie-joe<3
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 17
December 16th, 2006 at 01:35pm
Is it love to see you when I close my eyes
To want you for me
To make me touch the sky
Am I fallin in love deeply?

For you i could pick your heart up of the sea
Drink a milion cup of tea*
Take down a star in the night
I would like you to hug me tight...

I could bring you roses from heaven,
Believe your voice of treason
Make me just one reason
To love you a little more each season

*(of my grand ma^^)

Sorry for mistakes Embarassed
FINGER_FUDGE
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FINGER_FUDGE
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December 18th, 2006 at 11:15am
Aww..that made me feel all warm and gooey Smile Good job.
Kristmas_Tsanne
Great Success!
Kristmas_Tsanne
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December 18th, 2006 at 11:54am
Aw Very Happy
I loved it
EyesParalyzed
Geek
EyesParalyzed
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December 18th, 2006 at 12:39pm
wonderful !
newagecarny
Was Here Two Weeks Ago
newagecarny
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Mibba
December 18th, 2006 at 12:40pm
What's in a name?:


#1 A reply must contain some kind of feedback.*
It doesn’t have to be constructive criticism but you must tell why you
like/dislike the poem and/or what you like/dislike about it. **(Otherwise no
poet can improve).


Kitti


Oh and your rhyming is really forced.
Not every poem has to rhyme.
luv-you-billie-joe<3
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
luv-you-billie-joe<3
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 17
December 19th, 2006 at 01:24pm
ty* everyone^^Smile
lyrical_mess
Falling In Love With The Board
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Mibba Blog
December 19th, 2006 at 01:29pm
luv-you-billie-joe<3:
ty* everyone^^Smile


This is seriously off-topic, but your avatar is so so so so so damn awesome. It's cute and awesome.
What's in a name?
King For A Couple Of Days
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Mibba
December 19th, 2006 at 02:25pm
lyrical_gaah52:
luv-you-billie-joe<3:
ty* everyone^^Smile


This is seriously off-topic, but your avatar is so so so so so damn awesome. It's cute and awesome.

#9 Meg (nah, it not that serious, just keep it in mind) Smile
You could have said something about the poem and commented on the ava at the same time though ^_^
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